Title: Angel Wings of Dust
Link: https://www.penana.com/story/4728/angel-wings-of-dust/toc
Genre: Supernatural, War, Dark
Summary: A desperate struggle for earth has begun as angel and demon fight tooth and nail for supremacy. The Archangel Michael is entrusted to lead Heaven's armies against the forces of darkness but victory proves to come at a devastating cost.

I'm just wondering in what areas of the story and writing I could improve on. Thanks in advance!