My story, Night of Flames has gotten a lot of attention recently, which I love, but at the same time, nobody has answered my call for feedback there. If there are any beta readers who could point out inconsistencies or provied example paragraphs they think could be fine tuned, I would love to chat with them.

Night of Flames is a Sci-Fi novel with roots in Greek Mythology. I hope to officially publish this story one day, but it needs to go through a lot of editing. I'm not even sure where to focus my energy at this moment. I think the story could use some fresh eyes.

Tyasm

Hola, me gustaría apoyarte...y si es posible ¿quieras leer mi historia también? Es sobre mitología egipcia y africana

I appreciate you reaching out to me, Azama. You book sounds like so much fun, and I would love to explore other mythologies and to support you however I can. I am sorry if I'm not the biggest help since I will probably need to use a translator, but if you just need feedback from a reader, I am more than willing and able to help.

If there was something else you were hoping for in specific I'll do my best as well.

Thanks again ❤️

There is one question I have, though. I am a young author and your book is marked as 18+. Can I ask what kind of content marked it so high?

Konten cerita cewek berhijab hyper diwikwik labelnya

Hello everyone! I’m a French speaker but I want to translate my stories in English. Is someone interested to helping me with this?

I'd love to help you, @Aelita Yoru

Of course. I'd be glad to be a sort of English editor.

𝐻𝑒𝑙𝑙𝑜... 𝐼 𝑎𝑚 𝑎 𝑏𝑒𝑔𝑖𝑛𝑛𝑒𝑟 𝑤𝑟𝑖𝑡𝑒𝑟 𝑎𝑛𝑑 ℎ𝑖𝑔ℎ 𝑠𝑐ℎ𝑜𝑜𝑙 𝑠𝑡𝑢𝑑𝑒𝑛𝑡.
𝐼 ℎ𝑎𝑣𝑒 𝑝𝑢𝑏𝑙𝑖𝑠ℎ𝑒𝑑 𝑎 𝑛𝑜𝑣𝑒𝑙 𝑓𝑜𝑟 𝑡ℎ𝑒 𝑓𝑖𝑟𝑠𝑡 𝑡𝑖𝑚𝑒 ℎ𝑒𝑟𝑒 𝑎𝑛𝑑 𝐼 𝑤𝑎𝑛𝑡 𝑡𝑜 ℎ𝑒𝑎𝑟 𝑟𝑒𝑎𝑑𝑒𝑟𝑠' 𝑜𝑝𝑖𝑛𝑖𝑜𝑛𝑠 𝑎𝑏𝑜𝑢𝑡 𝑖𝑡. ....𝐴𝑛𝑑 𝑎𝑙𝑠𝑜 𝐸𝑛𝑔𝑙𝑖𝑠ℎ 𝑖𝑠 𝑛𝑜𝑡 𝑚𝑦 𝑚𝑜𝑡ℎ𝑒𝑟 𝑡𝑜𝑛𝑔𝑢𝑒 𝑎𝑛𝑑 𝐼 𝑓𝑒𝑒𝑙 𝑛𝑒𝑟𝑣𝑜𝑢𝑠 𝑎𝑏𝑜𝑢𝑡 𝑤𝑟𝑖𝑡𝑖𝑛𝑔 𝑖𝑛 𝑖𝑡  ...𝑠𝑜 𝐼 𝑤𝑜𝑢𝑙𝑑 𝑏𝑒 ℎ𝑎𝑝𝑝𝑦 𝑡𝑜 ℎ𝑎𝑣𝑒 𝑦𝑜𝑢𝑟 𝑜𝑝𝑖𝑛𝑖𝑜𝑛𝑠 𝑎𝑛𝑑 𝑎𝑑𝑣𝑖𝑐𝑒 𝑡𝑜 𝑖𝑚𝑝𝑟𝑜𝑣𝑒 𝑚𝑦 𝑤𝑟𝑖𝑡𝑖𝑛𝑔.
𝑇ℎ𝑎𝑛𝑘 𝑦𝑜𝑢

Yeah I can be your beta reader, however I am not sure if I would be able to read your story immediately as you publish, because I am a student myself. But I'd try my best. I would love to help you.