×

Penana
search
登入arrow_drop_down
註冊arrow_drop_down
請使用Chrome或Firefox享受更好的用戶體驗!
The School For Writers
The School For Writers
資料
動態消息
討論
會員 (39)
[Grade] I Am...
#1
XXjoeyXX
XXjoeyXX8 年前
Title: I Am
Status: In Progress
Link: http://www.penana.com/story/3804/i-am/toc
Description: Basically a series of chapters told from the point of view of various mental disorders and such.

Thank you in advance.
Anastasiabelle
Anastasiabelle8 年前
HI :) Do you still need your story graded?
XXjoeyXX
XXjoeyXX8 年前
@Anastasiabelle,  It's only a couple chapters, I need to update it, but yes please
Anastasiabelle
Anastasiabelle8 年前
@XXjoeyXX, okay :) Just give me a day or two. Do you want me to pm you the grade?
XXjoeyXX
XXjoeyXX8 年前
@Anastasiabelle, pm or post it here.  Im not picky
Anastasiabelle
Anastasiabelle8 年前
@XXjoeyXX, okay :)
#2
Anastasiabelle
Anastasiabelle8 年前
@XXjoeyXX,

Technical: spelling and grammar: 4
Plot: solidity and flow: 5
Character: depth, personality, and dialogue: 5
Creativity: originality, descriptiveness, and word variety: 5


Sorry for taking so long but here it is :) (It's not all but I'll add more.)
XXjoeyXX
XXjoeyXX8 年前
@Anastasiabelle, thank you!
Anastasiabelle
Anastasiabelle8 年前
@XXjoeyXX, you're welcome :)
#3
Anastasiabelle
Anastasiabelle8 年前
I will pm you my grading sheet/review as yours is not a story and I feel like the grading sheet is for stories mainly and not for what you wrote.
加入社群以參與討論!
加入社群以參與討論!