If you have a story you need some feedback on, reply to this and it's done! Simple as that!

I would love some! On Meltdown Heal the Heart of possible 😊

https://www.penana.com/story/7621/meltdown-heal-the-heart/issue/0

Impossibility ~ Sci-fi adventure

https://www.penana.com/story/11481/impossibility/issue/0

Thank you!

Can you read mine?

https://www.penana.com/story/17620/the-doctor-one-is-the-loneliest-number/issue/1

im looking more to see how well this is proof read  

https://www.penana.com/story/18428/city-of-sin-prologue

I'm very antic about my first story. It may(?) be a bit fast.

https://m.penana.com/story/17828/what-s-wrong-mr-catalyst/

I hope this is okay. It's probably really bad but it's still my story, so...

https://m.penana.com/story/14317/tales-of-silver-moon-nanowrimo-2016/issue/0

:)
-J. x

I want feedback on Shadow murderer

Hey! Could you read my story and offer some feedback? Would appreciate it!


http://www.penana.com/story/20143/slaughter-home

Hope you like it :3 [I'm a noob]

https://www.penana.com/story/21828/our-tale-of-wow