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Submit to me your writing!
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Writing Coaching
Writing Coaching5 年前
You can submit to me your writing for me to review your work, and coach you on how to make it better!
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Bones4
Bones45 年前
Signals
#13
Bones4
Bones45 年前
signals, proof reading etc. would be nice! Thank you
Writing Coaching
Writing Coaching5 年前
Getting to it right now!
#14
Maximus
Maximus5 年前
Hey there! I have a post apocalyptic book right now called Embers. If you get the chance to read it that would be amazing! I'd love critique and thoughts on it. Have a good day :)
Writing Coaching
Writing Coaching5 年前
Sure!
#15
 Aqueous
Aqueous5 年前
Yo. I've posted a short story and am looking forward to it being criticized. It'll be amazing for you to offer suggestions and opinions. Thanks.
Writing Coaching
Writing Coaching5 年前
I'll try to get to it!! :)
Writing Coaching
Writing Coaching5 年前
Umm whats it called?
 Aqueous
Aqueous5 年前
@Writing Coaching, "Your You're". The one and only story I have so far. Thanks!
#16
DylanHen
DylanHen5 年前
Talmeir: Spell Masters please :) if you could let me know what you think of the story and stuff that would be amazing
Writing Coaching
Writing Coaching5 年前
I'll check it out when I can!
#17
Seo
Seo5 年前
I would love for you to critique my story, Kiana Ahmadi: The Hooded Hero.
Writing Coaching
Writing Coaching5 年前
What genre is it?
Seo
Seo5 年前
@Writing Coaching, it is a YA adventure story.
#18
Lei André
Lei André5 年前
Hello there, I have just reposted a story, Ditch, it's a romantic YA novel I put on hold a few months ago (I'm not sure if you're into it) and I was hoping if it's not any trouble and if you have the time, maybe you can critique it? I' ve been trying my hand on 1st POVs so I'm still a bit new at it. Any feedback woulf be helpful. Thanks! ☺
Writing Coaching
Writing Coaching5 年前
Ahh First person is a killer. I'll check it out!
#19
Writing Coaching
Writing Coaching5 年前
Sorry to everyone that I can't get right away. I am very busy with my own stuff and school! I'll critique everyone as soon as possible!
#20
A_Girl_Who_Wrote
A_Girl_Who_Wrote5 年前
Hi! I'm currently working on a short story collection and would love some feedback on it: https://www.penana.com/story/45103/she-writes-shorts/toc :)
#21
Daniel Hur
Daniel Hur4 年前
Hi, my story is called Trish. It is a young adult fiction story, and I am still in the process of revising. I was wondering if you could see how I can make it better.

Link: https://www.penana.com/story/48235/trish/toc
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