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Can my first story be reviewed please?

Abdul2611 ⋅ 5 年前

I have written the first chapter of a story called Destiny without Honour! I would appreciate if i can get your honest opinions on it. This is the link to the chapter: https://www.penana.com/story/38553/destiny-without-honour/issue/1

Aretice N. Treader ⋅ 5 年前

Hi! I've read the chapters you have up. Would you like me to comment my feedback or pm you?

Abdul2611 ⋅ 5 年前

It shall be great if you can pm me about it thanks

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