I am kinda new at this I've always wrote in note books than my computer when we got but that was back with floppy disk. Flash forward to my wattpad days finally decided let the world see my work well no audience really I saw reads but all likes just me 😔. Now today working on one I pasted over to here I would like input thoughts ideas to help improve and make it flow. Nice criticism and be patient with me I am trying to read it and improve on my own but an outsid perspective would be nice.