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The Co-Write Setup
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sltb1996
sltb19966 years ago
Hi everyone! So I recently, posted the third chapter of my book Blood Love Power but I haven't received any sort of feedback. I rely heavily on reader feedback to know where to take the story next. Please help me out! PM me or comment what you think of my work so far and let me know if you are interested in being a cowriter/idea contributor. Thank you very much!
Resukaze
Resukaze6 years ago
You might get more readers if you put commas after the words "Blood" and "Love" so your title looks... well, smarter.
sltb1996
sltb19966 years ago
@Resukaze, Oh yeah there are commas in the actual title. Sorry!
Resukaze
Resukaze6 years ago
I'm just the comma witch. :)
sltb1996
sltb19966 years ago
@Resukaze, Have you had the opportunity to read my work? I'm still looking for feedback before beginning work on the next part
Resukaze
Resukaze6 years ago
No. The admins of my school district have fascist tendencies and don't approve of students that read and write online fiction, so I only have half an hour on school days to use this site. I can take several minutes to read, though.
Resukaze
Resukaze6 years ago
Okay, I read it and can help edit the grammar if you like. I only found a few mistakes, but the story itself is interesting.
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