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TheoryUndead
8Mins Each
2
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Fantasy Shorts
Updated Dec 12, 2019
PG-13
6
249
4

A collection of short fantasy writings, each their own individual chapter. Some may be related.

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Fantasy Shorts

A collection of short fantasy writings, each their own individual chapter. Some may be related.

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Brian Upton
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24
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Six Circles - Journey To Erwen
Updated Jan 17, 2020
PG
1
964
1
Adventure
Suspense

​​​​​Journey to Erwenis complete and is the first of nine novels in The Erwen Chroniclesseries. This first book is set for hardback, ebook & audio release in the Spring of 2020. Looking for some final active feedback before submitting the final draft !!

The books, written and outlined over twenty years, were at the outset a simple diary of my actual children’s lives set against the world of science fiction and fantasy that I am a huge fan of. Here is a quick synopsis of book one :

Twelve-year-old Tayler Anne Price has déjà vu so often that she has self-diagnosed it officially as a disease rather than a feeling. One afternoon, in the midst of the tedious familiarity of small-town middle school life and family drama, she is drawn to a magical pendant at a garage sale that quickly reveals itself to be not only a source of incredible power, but a portal to an alternate universe where she is somehow a prophesied savior in a land being torn apart by a political and religious war.

The plot, seemingly straightforward from a typical fantasy novel is turned upside down when our young heroine is forced to make a decision that will affect the fate of not only her life but that of two universes.....

Hope that you take a look and enjoy the adventure.

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Six Circles - Journey To Erwen

​​​​​Journey to Erwenis complete and is the first of nine novels in The Erwen Chroniclesseries. This first book is set for hardback, ebook & audio release in the Spring of 2020. Looking for some final active feedback before submitting the final draft !!

The books, written and outlined over twenty years, were at the outset a simple diary of my actual children’s lives set against the world of science fiction and fantasy that I am a huge fan of. Here is a quick synopsis of book one :

Twelve-year-old Tayler Anne Price has déjà vu so often that she has self-diagnosed it officially as a disease rather than a feeling. One afternoon, in the midst of the tedious familiarity of small-town middle school life and family drama, she is drawn to a magical pendant at a garage sale that quickly reveals itself to be not only a source of incredible power, but a portal to an alternate universe where she is somehow a prophesied savior in a land being torn apart by a political and religious war.

The plot, seemingly straightforward from a typical fantasy novel is turned upside down when our young heroine is forced to make a decision that will affect the fate of not only her life but that of two universes.....

Hope that you take a look and enjoy the adventure.

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Jochern
15Mins Each
8
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Ardaena Fellowship
Updated Mar 17, 2017
PG On Break
0
1976
0
Mythology
Family

Follow the High elf Sayana and her friends through the mythical and demon infested world of Ardaena to make a name for themselves and gain glory, infamy and reputation. (Ardaena remake)

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Ardaena Fellowship

Follow the High elf Sayana and her friends through the mythical and demon infested world of Ardaena to make a name for themselves and gain glory, infamy and reputation. (Ardaena remake)

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lonahora
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Earth's Core
Updated Jan 18, 2020
PG-13
4
55509
3
Action
Adventure

Book 1 – Earth's Core

Chapter 1 – Under The Surface Of The Earth

"O Earth, O Earth, how long, how many?

Set me free, O Earth, O Earth, Let nothing remain.

Others came and gone, O Earth, why me?

O Earth, cast me away, cast me away".

For the last thousands of years, since Nature's rules began to change and humanity's place at the top of the food chain as diminished, human beings, along with other creatures who couldn't handle the change has moved away from the surface of the Earth to a few kilometers beneath it.

Back then, 5775 years ago, it was thanks to a joint effort of human and beast that allow the discovery of the network of tunnels and giant caves underneath the Earth. Soon after, the surviving people, nearly eight hundred million in number and around 100 million different kinds of beasts who couldn't handle life on the surface of the earth, had immigrated underground and lived in separation of species since then.

Underground, exploration of the tunnels and caves has continued nonstop until 3705 years after the mass immigration and Nature's new rules has completely been set, and there was barely new stuff that humanity or beasts could discover anymore.

To sum up the results of 2070 years of exploration in one word will be "Miraculous". Although Nature, as some may say, turned its back on humanity and beasts, it sure has proven that for one drastic change within it that can be considered as unfavorable, another that is just as extreme and can be considered the opposite will take place.

How it is interpreted in relation to the network of tunnels and caves? Firstly, the majority of caves were big enough to host a city of millions of people, each, and some of the key point tunnels were hundreds of meters high and wide. Not to mention that this network covered nearly half of the planet! In many caves and tunnels even rich greenery and deep and wide clear water lakes were discovered. And yet, the most significant discovery came in the shape of bulky stone which was a special type of crystal that seemed to grow only inside this vast network of tunnels and giant caves.

These crystals gained the name "Sun Stones" and became no less valuable than holy items and Heaven's miracles to both humanity and beasts. The initial reason for this was the light radiating from the first discovered crystals which seemed to mimic the sun's light rays, but didn't have the negative effects of overexposure. The Sun Stone crystals that mostly grew at the ceilings of the tunnels and caves were high in number and also differ in sizes. The biggest discovered were around a few meters in diameter and the smallest around the size of a child's nail. Just to give an idea to how bright the Sun Stone crystals are, a crystal with a diameter of ten centimeters could light up a small hall and literally turn night to day. In the following years humanity will find a way to harvest the Sun Stones' radiation, at the same time solving the clean energy problem.

A few decades after sharing the complete report regarding the exploration of the underground, humanity and beasts at most finished their adaptation process to their new life, the boundaries between species were agreed upon and drawn on the rough maps describing the network of tunnels and giant caves areas – then were already called "New Earth's maps", and the New Erath's calendar was set officially starting in the last day of immigration. That was the start of the 3001 year.

Year 3997. Near humanity's one of most populated colonies, the Taltalon colony after its founding father and mother, established a couple hundred meters from the end of the tunnel that marked the border between species, a stream of earthquakes coming from the beasts' side shocked the colonists to their bones. The first few hours no one dared to live his home, but when it became unbearable anymore, some brave and stupid ones decided to check the source for the earthquakes.

What they saw froze them on their feet. Although they didn't know what to expect, underground earthquakes in New Erath were rare but not that surprising since usually had natural reasons, their faces were dumbfounded.

Two unseen before or heard of beasts, less than ten meters from humanity territory, were in a standoff. The bigger of the two was a horse like creature, almost six meters tall with red mane and eyes and brown hair. The other, the human spectators could only categorize as a type of fox only because the shape of its body and head. From the tip of its two tails to the edge of its nose to its sharp nails, all of it was completely yellow in color and its size in length two and a half meters long.

Only when the two beasts began to move again, some of the man watching seemed to understand both the cause of the earthquake and its reason. The two beasts were fighting over some kind of an earth stone.

The earth stone was beneath the horse's torso and whenever the eager fox tried to snatch it or bite the horse's legs, the horse would try to kick its head only to miss and strike the ground in disdain. Hence, the cause and reason for the earthquakes.

Afraid for their life, the best that some of the viewers could do to escape was crawl on their knees, while those who didn't turn their back, been too intrigued with the scene before them, gave up on trying to stand and set on the ground, believing that no matter what kind of beasts these two really are, they will respect the boundaries between two species.

The two fought for another hour before the horse finally gave up keeping the earth stone for itself. The fox let out a satisfied purr when it saw the horse steps back, although that purr only last a second since faster than any of the fox's movement during their fight, the horse kicked the stone, breaking its earthly cover and sending from it to the human's territory a round shiny object. The fox fur immediately stood on its back in resentment. Right away it was about to cross over the border and then stopped when the horse neighed aloud before returning to the deepest parts of the beasts' territory.

The fox's eyes were fixed on the direction the object flew at and then rested on the frightened humans. Knowing the rules it relaxed its tense tails and ears and turned around without looking back.

Jumping on their feet and running as if possessed by the spirits of the two beasts, any of the human spectators who saw clearly how the feud ended tried to get first to where the shiny object as landed. They arrived to the wheat fields before the first line of cabins in the colony. All panting yet still moving nonstop, speculating the value of the shiny object and eager to find it.

They even ignored the calls of the people who gathered outside since the firsts that returned on their knees arrived and spread what they saw.

"There!" A deep voice called and everyone, those who searched and those stood with confused facial expressions, ran to see what the forty something man as found.

Not sure if he should touch it, the man only let his voice attract everyone and then stood the closest to the object as everyone gathered. On the ground, in the size of a grown man fist was a sphere, brown and shining like mud with a smooth surface. When the eyes surrounding the sphere came even closer, reflected from the inside they saw light brown mist.

"Well… take it, Erdar, you found it". One man tried to push the first to discover the sphere to also be the first to touch it. In truth that man also wanted the sphere, if it will turn out to be nothing more than a gemstone, then its owner will become the richest man in the colony. The reason that this man still pushed Erdar to take the sphere was its place of origin. Since he was one of those who saw the fight till the very end, he assumed, like everyone else that's been there or heard and believed the story about the two never seen before creatures, that anything that unfamiliar might not be safe.

Knowing that if he will refuse to take the strange sphere he will instantly lose his right for it, Erdar, who is not very rich and his closest relative is his father which has not many years to live anyway, decided to bet on his life. His hand hesitantly hovered above the sphere and then, thinking about the fox's face and how it was willing to fight to the death with the horse just to get it, his five fingers formed a claw and snatched the sphere to his chest.

One second to ten second to a full one minute all gazes rested on Erdar while his eyes remained close, pending for something, hoping that nothing will happen. And then "I struck it rich!" Erdar screamed in his heart. "Unbelievable! Unbelievable!" his eyes opened as everyone finally realized that thunder won't strike today.

To make the analogy clear, when water from above the ground seep into the earth and wet the small Sun Stones at the ceilings of the tunnels and caves, a scenario that repeats itself every few years, dozens of the smallest Sun Stones crystals begin to explode in a manner that sounds like the ancient thunder storms. Even ray of light that replace the all might lightning occur in those time and causes small fires. That is the only down size of living in New Earth. And even though no one could find out why only waters from above cause this reaction to the Sun Stones while the water from the clear water lakes had no effect on the crystals whatsoever, they all become accustomed to these events and learned how to deal with the fires quite fast by mainly using their irrigation systems.

"Haha! Everyone, today drinks are on me!" Erdar announced and made his way through the crowd of envy eyes. Bitter, everyone followed him to his favorite tavern in the colony since with a bottle of ale even the poorest man could feel rich for a day.

"Salony, feast your eyes. Today I, Erdar, will quench the thirst of my fellow men and women". Erdar called loudly at the barkeep that numbered with the few that stayed at their place of work or homes during the earthquake.

"And how are you planning of doing it when just yesterday you avoided a discussion with me about your two months old tab?" Salony ignored Erdar's jolly mood.

"Listen to him, Salony", a few men stepped in. "that lucky bastard found a gemstone from the beasts' side!"

"A gemstone?!" Salony in a flash changed his attitude toward Erdar. "Then it should be my finest bottle for my dear costumer and friend of over ten years!"

"Haha, Salony, I like how nice you have become. Fine, pour your best drink three times to every empty cup, I will pay for it gladly and also close my tab today".

Hearing Erdar's order everyone cheered before he could change his mind, afraid of the saying that when a poor man turns rich so fast his judgment also turn very fickle.

"I sure would like to see for myself the gemstone that you found, of course, only if you don't mind". Salony said to Erdar while purring him the forth cup.

"Why not". Erdar agreed and reached into his coat inner pocket. "Empty?" Erdar didn't dare to say aloud. "No, it's got to be there". He checked the next pocket and the other three on the right side of his coat, but he couldn't find the brown gemstone.

"Thief!" In an act of desperation Erdar suddenly shouted. Until the moment his left hand struck Salony's back to harry up with his drink, it didn't left the pocket where he safeguard the gemstone, and now it was empty and because his head was so high near the surface he didn't know who might have snatched it and so refrained from pointing fingers. "Thief! Thief! Who dared to steal my gemstone?" He could only continue shouting.

In the blink of an eye, inside the tavern, a commotion erupted. The good people of the Taltalon colony who joined a free drink, Salony, the owner and barkeep of the tavern and above everyone else, Erdar, began to blame one another. From shouting, to cursing to eventually throwing fists, the lost gemstone made the peaceful colonists mad. Most got angered for the act of theft - an unforgiveable crime in any of the human colonies. Some, for just knowing the gemstone disappeared, even though it wasn't theirs. One, because he already poured two rounds of, apparently, free drinks. Others, because they didn't receive their promised third.

"You! You, Erdar! You and your lies!" Salony snapped, stepped over the counter and threw a punch that landed on Erdar's nose.

Blood spurted from Erdar's nose, but when he was about to curse and fight back, "Bowaa!" he felt like his inside spilling out from his mouth. Seeing the great amount of blood coming out from first, Erdar's mouth, then his eyes and ears until finally his body fell on the tavern's floor, shacking like it's about to burst, everyone jumped back and the commotion subsided.

"Poison! The thief also used poison. Hurry, someone call doctor Ernis!" One man shouted and immediately someone ran out. By that time Erdar stopped moving. Everything, every part of his body was too painful. He could no longer taste or smell the puddle of blood he fell on. Last thing he saw was the color red, all red.

"I'm dying. I'm really going to die. Why all I see is black…?" At death's door a strange serenity took hold of Erdar. "Rich or dead, rich or dead. I brought it upon myself. But who could believe that it will be because an act of theft. Very unlike of anyone that I know…" He discussed with himself as the white light approached. "What's that? What's happing" A sudden burning sensation from his stomach spread all over his body.

"Where is he?! Get me to-" Old doctor Ernis and two young paramedics arrived together with the man who went to call them. The moment doctor Ernis saw Erdar's poor state his mouth shut. "We need to hurry", he opened again and gave orders. "Forget everything and just place him properly on the stretcher. Oh, how could such thing have happened in our colony?!"

Without anyone's knowledge, time began to move differently between Erdar and the men and women around him. By the time doctor Ernis and the two paramedics reached Erdar's side, a certain event has already taken place inside the seemed to be dying man.

The color of the white light Eldar first thought to be the gate to the afterlife slowly turned dimmer and dimmer. The emerging fire in his abdomen was so hot that his soul mistook its heat for intense coldness. "Hell, I'm going to the third hell!" Eldar screamed in his mind, his soul fought the urge to give up and accept his fate, for he knew that after the unavoidable cold fire gates of the third hell all will pass, judgment will be given and incarnation will follow.

"Bang!" Doctor Ernis and the two paramedics flew on the surrounding people who all had faces full of astonishment. Erdar could finally feel his voice coming out of his throat, his ears became sharp, he heard the beating hearts around him, his nose smelled the vegetable fields at the other side of the colony and his eyes saw through the smallest of cracks on the tavern's wooden floor as his body stood on all four.

"Whaaa! It's good, great, amazing". Erdar had no words to describe how he felt. He raised his right hand and saw small brown mist particles coming out of it and getting back in again and again. He closed his eyes and for the first time in his life sensed not just his body, but also every molecule that made it. His mind sunk deeper in concentration and then he noticed it right beneath his navel, the gemstone! It was much smaller than when he held it, and there were many cracks on it and more forming at a slow pace. From every crack more and more mist got out, passing through his internal parts, leaving his body through the skin and getting back in . It was an endless cycle of "Heaven!"

The people in the tavern all looked with jaws dropped. In a manner of a few minutes, on the forty something man's bald head black hair plume started growing, his torn and broken from hard work skin became as smooth as a baby's bottom and when he opened his once gray and foggy eyes a bright spark reflected back at them and they looked much sharper.

"Erdar, don't move. Let me look at you". Doctor Ernis was so bewildered after witnessing the extraordinary phenomenon. He couldn't care less if he or his two young pupils got injured when Erdar woke up and unconsciously hit them. He rudely grabbed Erdar's chin and examined his eyes, opened his mouth, checked for fever but the man was as healthy as an ox, even better, he looked twenty years younger!

"A miracle, an undeniably miracle!" Doctor Ernis determined and moved away to take, yet again, a further look at Erdar.

"Haha, old Ernis, wrong, wrong". Erdar jumped nimbly on his feet and stretched. Doctor Ernis didn't know how to respond the so sure and confident Erdar. Having nothing to say he just stood and listened together with everybody else. "It's that gemstone I found, it's that, I tell you all. Sorry for all the mess and blaming, nobody stole my gemstone, haha…" He had the nerve to laugh it out, but who could prevent from laughing a man who a moment ago was as good as dead and now full of life like a new born baby.

"You son of-" Salony barged, "All of it a hoax! How many of you were in it, ah?!" he waved his hand in the air. Hearing the word "gemstone" he remembered all the ale he wasted, and seeing the broken stools and tables his hands clenched into fists. In pure rage Salony shot a straight punch to hit Erdar's nose again.

"Slow". Unlike last time, Erdar couldn't help but be marveled at how slow Salony was. With a nudge of his head he escaped the fist's trajectory and with a step to the side he struck at Salony's back to put him in his place.

Receiving Erdar's blow, a sound of shattering bones was heard. Salony's spine twisted unnaturally and his internals burst. The barkeeper and owner of the tavern fell to the floor dead.

Soon after, the rumors about a gemstone that grants superhuman powers spread like wildfire within humanity's territory.

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Earth's Core

Book 1 – Earth's Core

Chapter 1 – Under The Surface Of The Earth

"O Earth, O Earth, how long, how many?

Set me free, O Earth, O Earth, Let nothing remain.

Others came and gone, O Earth, why me?

O Earth, cast me away, cast me away".

For the last thousands of years, since Nature's rules began to change and humanity's place at the top of the food chain as diminished, human beings, along with other creatures who couldn't handle the change has moved away from the surface of the Earth to a few kilometers beneath it.

Back then, 5775 years ago, it was thanks to a joint effort of human and beast that allow the discovery of the network of tunnels and giant caves underneath the Earth. Soon after, the surviving people, nearly eight hundred million in number and around 100 million different kinds of beasts who couldn't handle life on the surface of the earth, had immigrated underground and lived in separation of species since then.

Underground, exploration of the tunnels and caves has continued nonstop until 3705 years after the mass immigration and Nature's new rules has completely been set, and there was barely new stuff that humanity or beasts could discover anymore.

To sum up the results of 2070 years of exploration in one word will be "Miraculous". Although Nature, as some may say, turned its back on humanity and beasts, it sure has proven that for one drastic change within it that can be considered as unfavorable, another that is just as extreme and can be considered the opposite will take place.

How it is interpreted in relation to the network of tunnels and caves? Firstly, the majority of caves were big enough to host a city of millions of people, each, and some of the key point tunnels were hundreds of meters high and wide. Not to mention that this network covered nearly half of the planet! In many caves and tunnels even rich greenery and deep and wide clear water lakes were discovered. And yet, the most significant discovery came in the shape of bulky stone which was a special type of crystal that seemed to grow only inside this vast network of tunnels and giant caves.

These crystals gained the name "Sun Stones" and became no less valuable than holy items and Heaven's miracles to both humanity and beasts. The initial reason for this was the light radiating from the first discovered crystals which seemed to mimic the sun's light rays, but didn't have the negative effects of overexposure. The Sun Stone crystals that mostly grew at the ceilings of the tunnels and caves were high in number and also differ in sizes. The biggest discovered were around a few meters in diameter and the smallest around the size of a child's nail. Just to give an idea to how bright the Sun Stone crystals are, a crystal with a diameter of ten centimeters could light up a small hall and literally turn night to day. In the following years humanity will find a way to harvest the Sun Stones' radiation, at the same time solving the clean energy problem.

A few decades after sharing the complete report regarding the exploration of the underground, humanity and beasts at most finished their adaptation process to their new life, the boundaries between species were agreed upon and drawn on the rough maps describing the network of tunnels and giant caves areas – then were already called "New Earth's maps", and the New Erath's calendar was set officially starting in the last day of immigration. That was the start of the 3001 year.

Year 3997. Near humanity's one of most populated colonies, the Taltalon colony after its founding father and mother, established a couple hundred meters from the end of the tunnel that marked the border between species, a stream of earthquakes coming from the beasts' side shocked the colonists to their bones. The first few hours no one dared to live his home, but when it became unbearable anymore, some brave and stupid ones decided to check the source for the earthquakes.

What they saw froze them on their feet. Although they didn't know what to expect, underground earthquakes in New Erath were rare but not that surprising since usually had natural reasons, their faces were dumbfounded.

Two unseen before or heard of beasts, less than ten meters from humanity territory, were in a standoff. The bigger of the two was a horse like creature, almost six meters tall with red mane and eyes and brown hair. The other, the human spectators could only categorize as a type of fox only because the shape of its body and head. From the tip of its two tails to the edge of its nose to its sharp nails, all of it was completely yellow in color and its size in length two and a half meters long.

Only when the two beasts began to move again, some of the man watching seemed to understand both the cause of the earthquake and its reason. The two beasts were fighting over some kind of an earth stone.

The earth stone was beneath the horse's torso and whenever the eager fox tried to snatch it or bite the horse's legs, the horse would try to kick its head only to miss and strike the ground in disdain. Hence, the cause and reason for the earthquakes.

Afraid for their life, the best that some of the viewers could do to escape was crawl on their knees, while those who didn't turn their back, been too intrigued with the scene before them, gave up on trying to stand and set on the ground, believing that no matter what kind of beasts these two really are, they will respect the boundaries between two species.

The two fought for another hour before the horse finally gave up keeping the earth stone for itself. The fox let out a satisfied purr when it saw the horse steps back, although that purr only last a second since faster than any of the fox's movement during their fight, the horse kicked the stone, breaking its earthly cover and sending from it to the human's territory a round shiny object. The fox fur immediately stood on its back in resentment. Right away it was about to cross over the border and then stopped when the horse neighed aloud before returning to the deepest parts of the beasts' territory.

The fox's eyes were fixed on the direction the object flew at and then rested on the frightened humans. Knowing the rules it relaxed its tense tails and ears and turned around without looking back.

Jumping on their feet and running as if possessed by the spirits of the two beasts, any of the human spectators who saw clearly how the feud ended tried to get first to where the shiny object as landed. They arrived to the wheat fields before the first line of cabins in the colony. All panting yet still moving nonstop, speculating the value of the shiny object and eager to find it.

They even ignored the calls of the people who gathered outside since the firsts that returned on their knees arrived and spread what they saw.

"There!" A deep voice called and everyone, those who searched and those stood with confused facial expressions, ran to see what the forty something man as found.

Not sure if he should touch it, the man only let his voice attract everyone and then stood the closest to the object as everyone gathered. On the ground, in the size of a grown man fist was a sphere, brown and shining like mud with a smooth surface. When the eyes surrounding the sphere came even closer, reflected from the inside they saw light brown mist.

"Well… take it, Erdar, you found it". One man tried to push the first to discover the sphere to also be the first to touch it. In truth that man also wanted the sphere, if it will turn out to be nothing more than a gemstone, then its owner will become the richest man in the colony. The reason that this man still pushed Erdar to take the sphere was its place of origin. Since he was one of those who saw the fight till the very end, he assumed, like everyone else that's been there or heard and believed the story about the two never seen before creatures, that anything that unfamiliar might not be safe.

Knowing that if he will refuse to take the strange sphere he will instantly lose his right for it, Erdar, who is not very rich and his closest relative is his father which has not many years to live anyway, decided to bet on his life. His hand hesitantly hovered above the sphere and then, thinking about the fox's face and how it was willing to fight to the death with the horse just to get it, his five fingers formed a claw and snatched the sphere to his chest.

One second to ten second to a full one minute all gazes rested on Erdar while his eyes remained close, pending for something, hoping that nothing will happen. And then "I struck it rich!" Erdar screamed in his heart. "Unbelievable! Unbelievable!" his eyes opened as everyone finally realized that thunder won't strike today.

To make the analogy clear, when water from above the ground seep into the earth and wet the small Sun Stones at the ceilings of the tunnels and caves, a scenario that repeats itself every few years, dozens of the smallest Sun Stones crystals begin to explode in a manner that sounds like the ancient thunder storms. Even ray of light that replace the all might lightning occur in those time and causes small fires. That is the only down size of living in New Earth. And even though no one could find out why only waters from above cause this reaction to the Sun Stones while the water from the clear water lakes had no effect on the crystals whatsoever, they all become accustomed to these events and learned how to deal with the fires quite fast by mainly using their irrigation systems.

"Haha! Everyone, today drinks are on me!" Erdar announced and made his way through the crowd of envy eyes. Bitter, everyone followed him to his favorite tavern in the colony since with a bottle of ale even the poorest man could feel rich for a day.

"Salony, feast your eyes. Today I, Erdar, will quench the thirst of my fellow men and women". Erdar called loudly at the barkeep that numbered with the few that stayed at their place of work or homes during the earthquake.

"And how are you planning of doing it when just yesterday you avoided a discussion with me about your two months old tab?" Salony ignored Erdar's jolly mood.

"Listen to him, Salony", a few men stepped in. "that lucky bastard found a gemstone from the beasts' side!"

"A gemstone?!" Salony in a flash changed his attitude toward Erdar. "Then it should be my finest bottle for my dear costumer and friend of over ten years!"

"Haha, Salony, I like how nice you have become. Fine, pour your best drink three times to every empty cup, I will pay for it gladly and also close my tab today".

Hearing Erdar's order everyone cheered before he could change his mind, afraid of the saying that when a poor man turns rich so fast his judgment also turn very fickle.

"I sure would like to see for myself the gemstone that you found, of course, only if you don't mind". Salony said to Erdar while purring him the forth cup.

"Why not". Erdar agreed and reached into his coat inner pocket. "Empty?" Erdar didn't dare to say aloud. "No, it's got to be there". He checked the next pocket and the other three on the right side of his coat, but he couldn't find the brown gemstone.

"Thief!" In an act of desperation Erdar suddenly shouted. Until the moment his left hand struck Salony's back to harry up with his drink, it didn't left the pocket where he safeguard the gemstone, and now it was empty and because his head was so high near the surface he didn't know who might have snatched it and so refrained from pointing fingers. "Thief! Thief! Who dared to steal my gemstone?" He could only continue shouting.

In the blink of an eye, inside the tavern, a commotion erupted. The good people of the Taltalon colony who joined a free drink, Salony, the owner and barkeep of the tavern and above everyone else, Erdar, began to blame one another. From shouting, to cursing to eventually throwing fists, the lost gemstone made the peaceful colonists mad. Most got angered for the act of theft - an unforgiveable crime in any of the human colonies. Some, for just knowing the gemstone disappeared, even though it wasn't theirs. One, because he already poured two rounds of, apparently, free drinks. Others, because they didn't receive their promised third.

"You! You, Erdar! You and your lies!" Salony snapped, stepped over the counter and threw a punch that landed on Erdar's nose.

Blood spurted from Erdar's nose, but when he was about to curse and fight back, "Bowaa!" he felt like his inside spilling out from his mouth. Seeing the great amount of blood coming out from first, Erdar's mouth, then his eyes and ears until finally his body fell on the tavern's floor, shacking like it's about to burst, everyone jumped back and the commotion subsided.

"Poison! The thief also used poison. Hurry, someone call doctor Ernis!" One man shouted and immediately someone ran out. By that time Erdar stopped moving. Everything, every part of his body was too painful. He could no longer taste or smell the puddle of blood he fell on. Last thing he saw was the color red, all red.

"I'm dying. I'm really going to die. Why all I see is black…?" At death's door a strange serenity took hold of Erdar. "Rich or dead, rich or dead. I brought it upon myself. But who could believe that it will be because an act of theft. Very unlike of anyone that I know…" He discussed with himself as the white light approached. "What's that? What's happing" A sudden burning sensation from his stomach spread all over his body.

"Where is he?! Get me to-" Old doctor Ernis and two young paramedics arrived together with the man who went to call them. The moment doctor Ernis saw Erdar's poor state his mouth shut. "We need to hurry", he opened again and gave orders. "Forget everything and just place him properly on the stretcher. Oh, how could such thing have happened in our colony?!"

Without anyone's knowledge, time began to move differently between Erdar and the men and women around him. By the time doctor Ernis and the two paramedics reached Erdar's side, a certain event has already taken place inside the seemed to be dying man.

The color of the white light Eldar first thought to be the gate to the afterlife slowly turned dimmer and dimmer. The emerging fire in his abdomen was so hot that his soul mistook its heat for intense coldness. "Hell, I'm going to the third hell!" Eldar screamed in his mind, his soul fought the urge to give up and accept his fate, for he knew that after the unavoidable cold fire gates of the third hell all will pass, judgment will be given and incarnation will follow.

"Bang!" Doctor Ernis and the two paramedics flew on the surrounding people who all had faces full of astonishment. Erdar could finally feel his voice coming out of his throat, his ears became sharp, he heard the beating hearts around him, his nose smelled the vegetable fields at the other side of the colony and his eyes saw through the smallest of cracks on the tavern's wooden floor as his body stood on all four.

"Whaaa! It's good, great, amazing". Erdar had no words to describe how he felt. He raised his right hand and saw small brown mist particles coming out of it and getting back in again and again. He closed his eyes and for the first time in his life sensed not just his body, but also every molecule that made it. His mind sunk deeper in concentration and then he noticed it right beneath his navel, the gemstone! It was much smaller than when he held it, and there were many cracks on it and more forming at a slow pace. From every crack more and more mist got out, passing through his internal parts, leaving his body through the skin and getting back in . It was an endless cycle of "Heaven!"

The people in the tavern all looked with jaws dropped. In a manner of a few minutes, on the forty something man's bald head black hair plume started growing, his torn and broken from hard work skin became as smooth as a baby's bottom and when he opened his once gray and foggy eyes a bright spark reflected back at them and they looked much sharper.

"Erdar, don't move. Let me look at you". Doctor Ernis was so bewildered after witnessing the extraordinary phenomenon. He couldn't care less if he or his two young pupils got injured when Erdar woke up and unconsciously hit them. He rudely grabbed Erdar's chin and examined his eyes, opened his mouth, checked for fever but the man was as healthy as an ox, even better, he looked twenty years younger!

"A miracle, an undeniably miracle!" Doctor Ernis determined and moved away to take, yet again, a further look at Erdar.

"Haha, old Ernis, wrong, wrong". Erdar jumped nimbly on his feet and stretched. Doctor Ernis didn't know how to respond the so sure and confident Erdar. Having nothing to say he just stood and listened together with everybody else. "It's that gemstone I found, it's that, I tell you all. Sorry for all the mess and blaming, nobody stole my gemstone, haha…" He had the nerve to laugh it out, but who could prevent from laughing a man who a moment ago was as good as dead and now full of life like a new born baby.

"You son of-" Salony barged, "All of it a hoax! How many of you were in it, ah?!" he waved his hand in the air. Hearing the word "gemstone" he remembered all the ale he wasted, and seeing the broken stools and tables his hands clenched into fists. In pure rage Salony shot a straight punch to hit Erdar's nose again.

"Slow". Unlike last time, Erdar couldn't help but be marveled at how slow Salony was. With a nudge of his head he escaped the fist's trajectory and with a step to the side he struck at Salony's back to put him in his place.

Receiving Erdar's blow, a sound of shattering bones was heard. Salony's spine twisted unnaturally and his internals burst. The barkeeper and owner of the tavern fell to the floor dead.

Soon after, the rumors about a gemstone that grants superhuman powers spread like wildfire within humanity's territory.

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Fox Trails and Tall Tails
Updated Jan 10, 2020
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A MAN IN THE PARTY
Updated Jan 6, 2020
G
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24
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Family
Romance

“Finally the day came,” I shouted happily in front of the window which I opened. I saw the servants prepared the castle for the party tonight. They decorated the castle carefully because there were many valuables of my mom. I opened my cupboard and looked around it then I took my best dress which my mom had prepared for me a week ago, not only I tried to wear the dress but also I wore out of my room and I run among the party room which was prepared by the servants. The head of the servants who was standing beside the sculpture looked me curiously and he approached me to say that I must save my energy for tonight. Oh my God! I was just too happy that I was going to meet many people who I met rarely.

After that, I saw my mom in front of the door before I went back to my room and I greeted my mom by waving my hand, she smiled at me and suddenly *prraaakk* the sound was so loud, all of the eyes pointed to the source of the sound. Two broken glasses were scattered on the floor. One of the servants who was standing beside the broken glasses was fright. My mom approached him and she scolded him. I didn’t like this situation so I went to my room as soon as I see it, I didn’t know what happened there next. My door was knocked by a mad, she brought some sandwiches and some glass of milk but I felt full. She put it on the table and left me with my breakfast. Two hours’ letter, I was eating my breakfast when my mom opened the door, she was not angry anymore and she gave me a big gift. She said that this is an early party present. I opened the gift and I saw a luxury bag in the box. Oh My God! I like it.

In the night, in the middle of summer, the party was started in my mom’s castle. Everybody came with their best dress, of course with their couple. I saw lots of various food served on a long table, everybody could enjoy the food. I was happy and enjoy at that moment. There were my old friends but I couldn’t get there because my mom told me that I must sit in the royal chair and didn’t go anywhere. Never mind, I could see them from this place. When I enjoyed my drink I saw a man in shining armor, he wore something different than the other but no one cares except me. Suddenly he looked at me and he smiled at me. I was shocked and I looked to the other side but when I looked at him again he was nothing there. I tried to find him but what I did was nothing. He had gone. Then, the dance’s song began, all of the people dance with their couple except me. My mom saw me hadn’t got a partner and just made an announcement that who want to be a partner of me, but no one cared.

“she is a beautiful smart graceful girl, are you crazy to ignore her?” said my mom. Oh no! she did it again. I don’t like it when my mom boasted about me.

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A MAN IN THE PARTY

“Finally the day came,” I shouted happily in front of the window which I opened. I saw the servants prepared the castle for the party tonight. They decorated the castle carefully because there were many valuables of my mom. I opened my cupboard and looked around it then I took my best dress which my mom had prepared for me a week ago, not only I tried to wear the dress but also I wore out of my room and I run among the party room which was prepared by the servants. The head of the servants who was standing beside the sculpture looked me curiously and he approached me to say that I must save my energy for tonight. Oh my God! I was just too happy that I was going to meet many people who I met rarely.

After that, I saw my mom in front of the door before I went back to my room and I greeted my mom by waving my hand, she smiled at me and suddenly *prraaakk* the sound was so loud, all of the eyes pointed to the source of the sound. Two broken glasses were scattered on the floor. One of the servants who was standing beside the broken glasses was fright. My mom approached him and she scolded him. I didn’t like this situation so I went to my room as soon as I see it, I didn’t know what happened there next. My door was knocked by a mad, she brought some sandwiches and some glass of milk but I felt full. She put it on the table and left me with my breakfast. Two hours’ letter, I was eating my breakfast when my mom opened the door, she was not angry anymore and she gave me a big gift. She said that this is an early party present. I opened the gift and I saw a luxury bag in the box. Oh My God! I like it.

In the night, in the middle of summer, the party was started in my mom’s castle. Everybody came with their best dress, of course with their couple. I saw lots of various food served on a long table, everybody could enjoy the food. I was happy and enjoy at that moment. There were my old friends but I couldn’t get there because my mom told me that I must sit in the royal chair and didn’t go anywhere. Never mind, I could see them from this place. When I enjoyed my drink I saw a man in shining armor, he wore something different than the other but no one cares except me. Suddenly he looked at me and he smiled at me. I was shocked and I looked to the other side but when I looked at him again he was nothing there. I tried to find him but what I did was nothing. He had gone. Then, the dance’s song began, all of the people dance with their couple except me. My mom saw me hadn’t got a partner and just made an announcement that who want to be a partner of me, but no one cared.

“she is a beautiful smart graceful girl, are you crazy to ignore her?” said my mom. Oh no! she did it again. I don’t like it when my mom boasted about me.

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Alika and The Fairy Tale
Updated Jan 6, 2020
PG-13
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School

Alika was bullied by her friends, and someday she found something that can help her to be brave.

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Alika was bullied by her friends, and someday she found something that can help her to be brave.

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VOILET and FLOWERLAND
Updated Jan 3, 2020
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IT IS A NEW FAIRYTALE STORY . where a girl went into another world by touching a tree there she meets a lot of people, goes to school and in the last what will  she choose to stay in new world or go to her home .

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VOILET and FLOWERLAND

IT IS A NEW FAIRYTALE STORY . where a girl went into another world by touching a tree there she meets a lot of people, goes to school and in the last what will  she choose to stay in new world or go to her home .

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Chosen "Heroes"
Updated Dec 28, 2019
PG-13
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Five totally unspecial children are "chosen" to be heroes and defeat the demon king's rise. The thing is, they weren't supposed to be heroes. None of them were due to their unstable powers, tempers and unusual backgrounds. Thanks to their friend's mistake, everyone's lives are resting in their hands.Can these unprepared heroes save the world? Or Fail miserably?

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Chosen "Heroes"

Five totally unspecial children are "chosen" to be heroes and defeat the demon king's rise. The thing is, they weren't supposed to be heroes. None of them were due to their unstable powers, tempers and unusual backgrounds. Thanks to their friend's mistake, everyone's lives are resting in their hands.Can these unprepared heroes save the world? Or Fail miserably?

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A Tale of Might and Heores
Updated Dec 22, 2019
PG
2
113
1
Adventure
Fantasy

' "The mines of Eledith!" exclaimed Merwin. He had heard about this marvellous place. Deep underground it bore gems, metals and ores which were found nowhere else.... And it was about to make a mark in his life. '

An adventure, which takes our hero across the lands to look for the treasure - but someone else has a lust for it.

If you find any mistakes, please comment so that you can help me correct them.

Next chapter (Chapter 4) releasing on: ON HOLD - it will be released sometime after 20/12/19

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A Tale of Might and Heores

' "The mines of Eledith!" exclaimed Merwin. He had heard about this marvellous place. Deep underground it bore gems, metals and ores which were found nowhere else.... And it was about to make a mark in his life. '

An adventure, which takes our hero across the lands to look for the treasure - but someone else has a lust for it.

If you find any mistakes, please comment so that you can help me correct them.

Next chapter (Chapter 4) releasing on: ON HOLD - it will be released sometime after 20/12/19

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The Master Race
Updated Dec 15, 2019
PG
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57
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RELIGION – POWER – WEALTHThis is what the human race have reduced to since they emerged victorious in the Great War of Hominids, hundreds of years ago, that eventually made them the masters of Nature – The Master Race.King Gara inherits a crumbling empire. An ancient book is discovered that threatens the old faith. He must decide whether to change the ancient rules his ancestors set and embrace the new religion or to enforce the Old faith and watch his lands divide further. Either way, a rebellion is inevitable. Meanwhile the stories of the dwellers of the Old Neanderlands spread fear across the empire. Stories of extinct creatures and rumors of an old foe. A foe that had promised revenge hundreds of years ago. Have the old mistakes of the Master Race finally caught up to them?  

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The Master Race

RELIGION – POWER – WEALTHThis is what the human race have reduced to since they emerged victorious in the Great War of Hominids, hundreds of years ago, that eventually made them the masters of Nature – The Master Race.King Gara inherits a crumbling empire. An ancient book is discovered that threatens the old faith. He must decide whether to change the ancient rules his ancestors set and embrace the new religion or to enforce the Old faith and watch his lands divide further. Either way, a rebellion is inevitable. Meanwhile the stories of the dwellers of the Old Neanderlands spread fear across the empire. Stories of extinct creatures and rumors of an old foe. A foe that had promised revenge hundreds of years ago. Have the old mistakes of the Master Race finally caught up to them?  

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Halfling
Updated Dec 21, 2019
PG-13
32
337
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Gods and goddesses roaming the Earth. Demigods crammed into one school. Monsters straight from Tartarus rampage across the continent. How much fun can’t Alice have?

After being caught stealing a woman’s purse, the independent Alice is sent to a boarding school after an officer requests so. The initial plan was to rehabilitate her. Then life took a turn. Now, she’s a demigod fighting monsters.

A/N:

So most of these chapter will only take two minutes to read, since I’m not the kind of person who likes reading long ass chapters.

Quick warning, some of the dialogues have bad words so yeah.

Might take me a few days to write a chapter since I’m currently too bored.

I’m sorry if it might be boring in some chapters. I’m trying.

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Halfling

Gods and goddesses roaming the Earth. Demigods crammed into one school. Monsters straight from Tartarus rampage across the continent. How much fun can’t Alice have?

After being caught stealing a woman’s purse, the independent Alice is sent to a boarding school after an officer requests so. The initial plan was to rehabilitate her. Then life took a turn. Now, she’s a demigod fighting monsters.

A/N:

So most of these chapter will only take two minutes to read, since I’m not the kind of person who likes reading long ass chapters.

Quick warning, some of the dialogues have bad words so yeah.

Might take me a few days to write a chapter since I’m currently too bored.

I’m sorry if it might be boring in some chapters. I’m trying.

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