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He had once again shown up, and destroyed the monster with great ease and great pleasure. A Prideful smile kept tauntingly on his face as he stared at his wonderful work. Denali rolled her eyes and folded her arms over her chest. He had once again saved her, which she was thankful for but her thankfulness was overshadowed with his own overwhelming glory. Turning, Denali decided now was as good a time as ever to leave. But she was easily noticed. Subarashīdesu, which was too long to say, so she just called him Suba, turned towards her.388Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVb7HtfJZK8
“It seems once again Denali, you have lead me to another wonderful fight.” He said rather pleased with himself, swinging his sword lazily over his shoulder. Denali turned.388Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡy5GcpGcJPb
“How the heck do you know my name? And WHY do you just so HAPPEN to show up whenever…” She paused, not really sure how she wanted to finish her sentence.388Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvMtLxdZAC1
“You get yourself into trouble?” He asked as he begun to walk to her, the air around him just thick with his cockiness. He then paused a few feet from her.388Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJ8JP1pfugA
“Well to answer your question, after I realized you can sense when evil occurs, I started following you.” Denali was stunned, but knew he wouldn’t lie. Although there were many things about him she didn’t approve of, he was no liar.388Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxgp1tF7Phr
“You FOLLOW me?!” She hissed, blood rushing to her face in a mixture of embarrassment and anger.388Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrEuFSSXIYd
“Of course, how else am I supposed to find all of these creatures?” He asked leaning down and placing a hand on her shoulder. Denali smacked his hand away.388Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIaPP3tTczQ
“Don’t touch me.” She said with a serious tone, stone cold enough for him to simply give a light smile, and put his hand safely back in his pocket.388Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGvvhVWjEn6
“ What’s your PROBLEM?” Denali asked. Suba chuckled and moved in a little closer, bending down to her level.388Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYeQvGhK2w9
“ I think you know perfectly well what my problem is…or really, who it is.” His voice was deep, soft, but laced with his own self esteem. Denali jabbed a finger into his forehead and pushed him back. Suba sat up, pulling himself up to his full height, which was nearly two feet above Denali.388Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBHwz89oZkL
“I can’t believe you follow me, that is so weird! It is incredibly inappropriate for you to-“ He rolled his eyes, fixing them up and away, his mind clearly slipping to something else. Denali knew that look all too well, almost every man was capable of it.388Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNmhUYnEOFi
“HEY LISTEN TO ME YOU OFE!” He sighed and rolled his eyes again before looking back at her.388Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEpqnUp1N8L
“Hey, I saved your life, this is the 3rd time now. The way I see it you owe me.” He lightly smiled.388Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9R3X5mGawe
“You should be grateful I was around.”
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