1. 講故事的差異551Please respect copyright.PENANAWCWw58F6vj
港台的小說,到了大陸會水土不服,最主要是兩岸三地講故事技巧的差異。
2. 望遠鏡和放大鏡551Please respect copyright.PENANAg7wc8vLeMh
以懸疑文為例,來解釋兩者的講故事差異。
放大鏡(港台澳)551Please respect copyright.PENANAuzLcj0XEN6
要求:新穎的腦洞、優秀的文筆、有趣的角色551Please respect copyright.PENANAwV19tscrdK
看點:551Please respect copyright.PENANAkRd0roW3Ns
a. 有趣的角色對話和互動551Please respect copyright.PENANAcpJaf5O87Q
b. 有趣的腦洞世界觀551Please respect copyright.PENANA9d8IdJlO32
c. 文筆優美,用詞優雅551Please respect copyright.PENANARLtPBbIwoB
但欠缺了:清晰的敘事能力551Please respect copyright.PENANAmorxBJcyv4
反方讀者:連個故事都講不清楚,什麼垃圾551Please respect copyright.PENANAXRysiKsv7O
正方讀者:很有趣的角色和世界觀設定
望遠鏡(大陸網文)551Please respect copyright.PENANAJttg70FDBx
要求:簡單清晰的敘事能力、聚焦縣念型題材的賣點551Please respect copyright.PENANA5usBEgxMRJ
看點:551Please respect copyright.PENANAKxuzu79NAH
a. 這本書的核心是賣什麼551Please respect copyright.PENANAXhtwA8OA5u
b. 主角是誰,發生什麼事551Please respect copyright.PENANA0fJEPWFRYp
c. 有趣的劇情551Please respect copyright.PENANAPgRVrciGEE
但欠缺了:公式套路、限制創意551Please respect copyright.PENANA0pycWRm9SU
反方讀者:又是這些套路文,什麼垃圾551Please respect copyright.PENANAZHMcatOdzI
正方讀者:這種題材我最喜歡了
3. 選擇551Please respect copyright.PENANAGLRAU23viD
既然目標是內投簽約起點,那麼選擇【望遠鏡】的公式套路文風格是必需的。551Please respect copyright.PENANAx8RZTJGXpx
以我內投簽約懸疑文為例,分析大陸網文的看點:551Please respect copyright.PENANATqCYpG32DM
a. 賣點:就是賣怪談筆記,主角創詭時思考。551Please respect copyright.PENANAPybmi0pD3S
b. 敘事:男主是十八線藝人,有微笑抑郁,幸得【怪談筆記】,主打傳統詭異和角色成長。551Please respect copyright.PENANAzHSBH5kv51
c. 劇情:類似空調的角色成長,傳統副本的求生升級。
4. 踏雷551Please respect copyright.PENANAtyiTCl1D1q
曾經搞錯過的賣點:551Please respect copyright.PENANAlFzRuvBkF0
a. 有趣的角色。但是代入感都沒有,完全不有趣。551Please respect copyright.PENANADEVlrt9gVc
b. 有趣的世界觀:但是連故事都未講清楚,太拉跨。551Please respect copyright.PENANAWyQZZvQVyA
c. 開局太多角色:但是看得混亂,可棄文。551Please respect copyright.PENANAttUC0JEhch
d. 只抄了某元素:只抄某金手指,但是核心的賣點都沒搞清,又拉跨了。551Please respect copyright.PENANAzJXm78lg7y
e. 只抄了某節奏:只抄某大神節奏,但是核心的賣點都沒搞清,又拉跨了。