剛開始寫個廣播劇嘅時候,我太過在意將發生過嘅嘢完全重現,結果搞到好多細節因爲冇資料而唔知點寫。不過好彩到寫到第三集嗰陣,我已經衝破咗呢個心理關口。真又好、假又好,如果個廣播劇放出去係冇人睇、冇人留言嘅話,根本就唔會有人談論。而家連第一關都未過嘅我又何必咁在意d人會覺得個故事係咪跟足事實呢?
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上網勿認真,認真就輸了嘛。
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稍微諗通咗呢點嘅我寫嘢慢慢暢順咗。廣播劇入面,昭煌要小倩同阿仁攤牌先肯同佢去日本。好坦白講,呢段劇情係我加上去嘅。雖然我好清楚呢個係事實,但站響劇情嘅角度嚟講,我需要加強阿仁劇情後面出手對付昭煌嘅動機,因為現實中我根本唔知阿仁點解咁執著要對付昭煌。同時我亦想俾聽衆知道,小倩爲咗實現理想可以變得有幾蠢。
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我攞住呢個理由俾阿仁睇頭三集嘅劇本,原本諗住都要花一番唇舌先可以說服佢「修飾過個故事」嘅做法,但估唔到原來我又係諗多咗。阿仁睇完之後幾乎係零反應,只係淡淡咁應咗句「OK丫,唔錯。」咁就算。
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人就係咁犯賤,阿仁唔在乎嘅態度反而令到我好唔自在。我見佢睇完轉身就行,捉住佢問:「你唔怪我俾隻死貓俾你食咩?」
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阿仁聳一聳肩,就好似睇緊一個唔關佢事嘅故仔咁。
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「件事都過咗咁多年啦,當初小倩有冇同我攤牌,已經唔再重要。」
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「其實你係放低咗,抑或係從來冇中意過人?」
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阿仁聽到我嘅問題,俾咗個模棱兩可嘅笑容我:「有又點、冇又點?而家最緊要係搞掂個劇,只要個班演員同你嘅故事可以表達到昭煌有幾仆街,對我嚟講就已經足夠啦。」
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阿仁嘅答案令我有少少愕然。真真假假,佢話我簡化咗件事又好,嬲我抹黑佢又好,咁都起碼叫有d表示丫。而家佢嘅反應,擺明就話我知佢成副心機已經擺曬落去「追擊昭煌」件事上面,就算故事係假嘅,佢都唔在乎。呢一點對我嚟講真係有d抵觸。我從來無諗過要寫假嘅故仔去屈一個人,哪怕嗰個係一個騙財騙色長達十年嘅老千。而阿仁對呢點,原來並唔太在乎,呢件事就成為咗我同佢之間嘅第一個分歧。
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最後,我成個戇居仔咁攞住份劇本分發俾其他人,阿仁肯收貨,其他人當然唔會講d乜。只要個劇播出之後聽衆聽得明、覺得有趣,其實有邊個會在意?
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更何況,有更大鑊嘅嘢即將要發生。175Please respect copyright.PENANAAlhmYCrScT
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阿仁收咗我頭三集劇本之後,突然就話要開始正式錄音。我聽到當堂嚇咗一跳:「乜你唔係等我寫好曬先開始錄嘅咩?」175Please respect copyright.PENANA3MMN6BxHjl
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「我哋做嘢點可以咁慢㗎,拍戲飛紙仔都係咁啦!」175Please respect copyright.PENANAVbBQbYKgjx
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我絕對唔係一個職業編劇,頂多就係響討論區寫吓故嘅寫手一名。拍戲係點飛紙仔我冇經歷過,但只係得三集存貨就開始錄音,咁即係要我同製作組鬥快啦。175Please respect copyright.PENANAXtTIhQ8yR7
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阿仁見我有少少不滿,笑口騎騎咁講:「諾斯你掂嘅!套劇越快d搞掂出街,咁咪可以快d阻止更多受害人嘅出現囉。」175Please respect copyright.PENANAqdh2zYZAOM
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其實係咪可以幫到人,我由始至終一d把握都冇。只不過阿仁已經決定咗咁做,除非呢刻我話唔搞套劇,否則都係唯有硬食。175Please respect copyright.PENANA24dYbvJnRB
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一般情況,我放工之後開始寫,通常兩日左右就可以完成一集劇本,但爲咗要追製作組嘅速度,我唯有連Lunch都放棄埋,每日返工食晏嘅時候咬住個包繼續寫,然後將份稿擺上Google Document,方便我去廁所又寫吓,排隊搭車時候又寫吓。點知兩日後,響我努力嘔緊第四集劇本出嚟嘅時候,祕書子波利突然打俾我叫我唔洗咁急交劇本住。175Please respect copyright.PENANAbZwvIuKF1C
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「阿仁有冇俾過佢哋錄嘅第一集你聽呀?」175Please respect copyright.PENANA2NUQw670U9
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波利咁問法,恐怕都係出咗事㗎啦。點知當佢send個MP3俾我,我真係聽咗唔夠十秒就頂唔順擺低,心入面只係得番五個字:唔・撚・係・呀・嘛?175Please respect copyright.PENANAkL4YNbIrNE
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阿仁好明顯係攞部電話出嚟,叫班演員圍埋嚟讀稿就算。唔好講話剪接同空間感,就連揭紙嘅聲我都聽得一清二楚,根本完全投入唔到個劇情。175Please respect copyright.PENANAp0QDDe6TQT
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「波利呀,你哋製作組唔係租Studio錄音嘅咩?」175Please respect copyright.PENANAjdQf2p6BaW
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「租咩Studio呀?」175Please respect copyright.PENANADgXpjApaNN
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我聽到波利咁講,真係差d暈低,唯有開始慢慢講解一下廣播劇嘅製作。175Please respect copyright.PENANAGJ1UOzwOSD
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坊間唔少人都會錄吓自己唱歌擺上網。通常只要支咪靚少少,環境安靜番少少,搵部Laptop都可以錄到唔錯嘅效果。不過做廣播劇就完全係另一回事。因爲廣播劇冇畫面嘅關係,聽衆會將所有集中力去曬對耳度,稍微有d瑕疵都會放大十倍。175Please respect copyright.PENANA7Fqu9pdr23
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聽衆能唔能夠投入一個劇,好睇整件事嘅氣氛營造得成唔成功。演技固然係緊要啦,但係硬件方面,一大班人共用一支咪,大家要互相遷就埋咪講對白,好容易會出現對白銜接得唔自然嘅情況,就連衣服摩擦聲都好可能會錄埋。再加上人同咪之間嘅距離亦會影響果句對白錄出嚟嘅距離感,如果唔能夠響一個錄音室嘅環境下錄音,要響後製時候處理曬所有雜聲同瑕疵,就算肯俾錢應該都未必會有人肯接呢個工作嚟做。175Please respect copyright.PENANAgcEvXocZuJ
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波利聽完我講嘅說話之後面色一沉,「我都知大鑊㗎啦,阿仁完全低估咗成件事。」175Please respect copyright.PENANAMbsY8hOIn5
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我見波利成個人頹曬,響公司借咗支拍嘢用嘅咪借俾製作組,點知半日之後,佢哋重錄多一次,今次因爲支咪靚咗,我唔單只可以聽到佢哋每個人嘅揭紙聲、呼吸聲,就連吞口水同外面有車行過都聽得一清二楚。原本第一集阿仁響屋企寫小說嘅場口,錄出嚟好似阿仁響條街咁……175Please respect copyright.PENANAyINTaAhcjC
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「諾斯呀,阿仁話打算問人借錄音室,不過我諗……不如我哋自己出去搵比較穩陣啦。」175Please respect copyright.PENANAEoqv7DwGMZ
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都話咗,上網勿認真,認真就輸了㗎啦。175Please respect copyright.PENANAaV5AhlB3c2
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波利認真嘅態度影響咗我。反正而家份稿寫到小倩瞞住阿唯出發去機場,後面嘅劇情需要訪問另一位受害人,趁有少少時間,我咪答應咗波利出去搵吓邊度有錄音室囉。冇諗到,咁樣出一出去,我哋行勻曬新蒲崗、九龍灣、觀塘、油塘,望一望錶先知原來已經係夜晚八點幾九點。最後我哋響APM Food Court搵到個位坐低,點知連飯都未食,波利就已經攤曬d錄音室資料響檯上面分析。175Please respect copyright.PENANADwP8LegSAB
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「你食d嘢先慢慢再睇啦。」我望眼前呢個女仔咁認真,實在唔好意思自己走去買嘢食。175Please respect copyright.PENANATm2eulBXaI
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「你去買嘢食啦,我睇埋d資料再去買d嘢飲就得㗎啦。」波利成個Missy坐響度改卷咁嘅款,揮一揮手打發我走。175Please respect copyright.PENANAo4EJsUYYUl
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衆所周知,要響APM Food Court買嘢食就容易,但買嘢飲嘅選擇就比較少。我見波利咁投入,索性落去樓下一田買支伊藤園俾佢,自己就要咗支蔘蜜。點知返上嚟,佢一手就攞咗支蔘蜜嚟飲,我望住支伊藤園……唉,淡d就淡d啦。175Please respect copyright.PENANAJBUpVEao95
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呢晚,我同波利第一次爲個劇做咗d唔係我哋負責嘅工作。我有問過波利,佢係咪受害者之一,點知波利聽完笑到標眼淚。佢話答應阿仁幫手純粹係因爲太清楚阿仁份人做嘢甩甩漏漏。只不過,見住阿仁滿腔熱血話幫受害人做番d嘢,波利覺得件事好有意義所以就答應幫忙。175Please respect copyright.PENANAgZM9XXWfM4
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「乜原來討論區真係有人會爲咁嘅事出嚟㗎?」我飲咗啖伊藤園,果種苦苦哋嘅茶味纏繞住我喉嚨,同蔘蜜果種甘苦味道好唔同,係一種我唔太習慣嘅味道。175Please respect copyright.PENANAiByoi79VDw
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「唔通你以爲真係所有人都係鍵盤戰士?」波利擘大雙眼笑住咁反問我。175Please respect copyright.PENANAZBgQyOj0tN
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「呢d冇回報嘅嘢,講出嚟都俾人恥笑啦。」175Please respect copyright.PENANAb0XcpQPiRq
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「恥笑咪恥笑囉,我良心過意得去就得啦。」