Hello, everyone!! Thank you so much for entering this contest. I was blown away by all of your entries; they were amazing! The violence, the romance, the emotion! You all certainly made my Tuesday morning.126Please respect copyright.PENANAYKI2v7FNzc
As I did with my previous contest, I’m going to be adding comments to each submission.126Please respect copyright.PENANA5umfOMBKit
Grammar: 5 points126Please respect copyright.PENANAIJCzVWxioq
Creativity: 10 points126Please respect copyright.PENANAZq7eStdRvb
Emotion: 5 points126Please respect copyright.PENANAGPpJWwtn8f
Complying with the rules: 5 points
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#1: “Its better to fall(inspired by All Summer in a Day)” by SomethingSomethingSomethi126Please respect copyright.PENANA8IgIfqpEqo
This would’ve also been an amazing entry for my Perfect contest! I love it so much. I haven’t read All Summer in a Day yet (if you’re talking about the book), but now I must! You have a creative way with words, and thank you for entering!126Please respect copyright.PENANA6AaBrHWEq3
Total: 20.5 pts
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#2: “Just leave me alone” by Mia Flame126Please respect copyright.PENANAXiOl1zRojn
I can’t be the only one who just adores the line, “I looked up at him, willing myself not to get lost in his eyes like I did five years ago." I love how you put two perspectives in this story as well! Thank you so much for entering!126Please respect copyright.PENANA1YHw91Uxsp
Total: 19 pts
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#3: “For Becky” by Bluemoon Scriptor126Please respect copyright.PENANAkDRxpQw2Sv
I have no words, Bluemoon Scriptor. I need this to be a novel. Hell, a movie too. The way you describe things is…again, I have no words.
The plot twist at the end was great too! Thank you for entering!126Please respect copyright.PENANADmpclLsi2J
Total: 23.5 pts
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#4: “What Happens When We’re Sober” by MarkTwain2.0126Please respect copyright.PENANAxDPkpZ79Df
Yes! Rue and Malachi are back! And you created such a beautiful story in under five hundred words! 126Please respect copyright.PENANAcTDrUC532r
I can’t lie, you’re amazing with dialogue. Keep up the great work, and thank you for entering!!126Please respect copyright.PENANA1zosPawa46
Total: 20 pts
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#5: “To Wait Out The Rain” by Clovers126Please respect copyright.PENANAgaazpp63Lh
The last two lines were just perfect, Clovers! And the line, "Our lips fit like two pieces of a jigsaw puzzle, the kiss gentle and warm, producing a heated fuzzy sensation in my chest” is such a beautiful description. Thank you for entering!126Please respect copyright.PENANAby4HcfV09Z
Total: 21 pts126Please respect copyright.PENANAXJ3JU3R0Fh
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Honorable Mentions!! (In no particular order)126Please respect copyright.PENANAHmF4sw9TcY
~~ “Just leave me alone” by Mia Flame ~~ 126Please respect copyright.PENANAwQPRLefnXP
~~ “What Happens When We’re Sober” by MarkTwain2.0 ~~
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Never stop writing,
Julia126Please respect copyright.PENANAB3jXSSE48a
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