一、請簡單自我介紹，列出喜歡的作品跟創作類型：215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHwzp4Iex1D
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二、請簡述本次活動想提出討論的作品內容角色設定：215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFhYNHYrLvm
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劇情重要衝突與阻礙（請提供作品章節連結）：魔王與勇者方是對立 但是勇者方是不道德的一方215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡr0wBLySyUN
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主角目標與成長：找到魔王並協助消滅勇者方215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEbRMOJa7EL
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想提出討論的開車章節（含預備車）：每一篇的18+內容215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYCpP5UDLtx
自覺開車不順的點（整體論，非特定章節）：開起來感覺像是傳動軸有問題 卡卡的 說不上來哪裡有問題215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvp4BGAHgNe
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◎ 有開車但覺得不太順暢的新米車手215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrayD8rZzst
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原本想寫的車但沒開成的篇幅，請寫300字概念大綱，215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2yWxkO7mNV
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突然一陣風括起，我看克萊娜微微顫抖的肩膀，將他們給我穿的西裝外套脫下給她披上，她有些訝異的看了看我後，便將外套往內拉包裹住自己說：215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlilSe7OOyn
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「謝謝你勇者大人，您真的很溫柔呢。召喚到您真的是我國最大的福祉。」215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡj6ftfhO1CD
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「克萊娜小姐......」215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhrhRygdhAy
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「勇者......克里斯大人。」215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnoxuaQ9Qeq
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我輕輕扶起她的下巴，慢慢地親吻她濕潤朱紅的唇。215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcAgYni9gqX
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「嗯，克里斯大人，您下午說的事情......嗯啾，我們去房間說吧。」215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaAUBoVipZo
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我一邊品嘗著她柔嫩且溫潤的雙唇，一邊將她抱起從一旁小道走回我的房間，將門關上以及窗簾拉上後，我便將她放在床上。215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfBBAaaNsgt
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「克里斯......大人，姆嗯，等我，阿恩～」215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXlawEvbdPS
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「沒事，我幫妳脫吧。」215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpJUihyy6iR
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我將自己的衣服褲子瞬間解開脫掉後，便上到了床，一邊持續的親吻一邊利索的將她的禮服後的拉鍊往下拉，此時她傲人的雙胸挾帶著兩朵白峰上的紅暈及小巧紅潤的尖頭。215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYLgYGKcig5
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看到後我便順勢的從她白皙的頸部一挑逗至她敏感且柔潤的雙胸。215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXJbgsqhKYu
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「啊～克里斯大人，乳頭不可以，嗯......啊嗯，不可以咬啦～」215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJa46p0kUqf
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用門牙輕輕的左右咬著她並且持續像是吸卡住珍珠的粗吸管一樣用力，一隻手搓揉另一球之外，另一隻手緩緩的伸到她敏感且似乎剛剛有處理過、摸上去還有些渣人的陰毛處。215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmYEWM4Wmpo
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「啊嗯，這樣吸不會有母乳的～，除非......」215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡG6MTEpuf74
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她很大方的打開了大腿，我的手也停在了她的小穴門口，她的手撐著她的大腿，嬌喘的說道：215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUZwzV82o1p
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「克里斯大人能把你雄偉的肉棒放入這個淫亂的小穴裡......」215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjnCFc7SovF
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「嗯？我沒有聽清楚妳的需求喔，我沒有打算讓妳懷上我的小孩耶，我只想吸這對該死又舒服的奶子，妳最好在詳細的描述一下妳的需求比較好喔。」215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCfPcQ0pTrP
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我撐起身子，看著她嬌喘且淫亂的表情，我笑著一邊說一邊用早已勃起很久的肉棒貼近她的肉穴附近來回的轉，就是不插入。215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡD2tcz38fXt
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看著她似乎很著急但是也不知道要說些甚麼，而她要說話時我便一嘴親住她的唇，並且將舌頭粗暴的伸進她的嘴裡一直攪和著。215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIrXEzaaLln
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「嗚嗯......啾......哈啊......哈啊嗯～克里蘇.....大人......嗚嗯！啾.......嗚啾......哈啊哈......克利斯大人，我.......我......嗯～」215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhhRx9fxQzn
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「妳不說清楚我怎麼知道妳要做甚麼呢？克萊娜小姐？」215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡD8Zl5h3hqG
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我伸著蛇頭緩緩的離開，並從她的舌上拉出一條長長的細絲，她像是失了神的說：215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDzN2nGtsYq
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「克里斯大人......您真的......很厲害呢......人家已經......去了好幾次......明明都還沒插入......嗯嗯～克里斯大人，您的手指！啊嗯～～」215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYr3mM25tLL
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「是喔？我確認看看？」215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKnB7EN3iTJ
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沒等她說完我便將兩隻手指緩緩的滑入她的肉穴之中，然後在裏頭一上一下的往前撫摸著。215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpIjUEdBglh
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「等一下克里斯大人，我才剛去，啊嗯！那裡！不行！」215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡw6vIjgzsMF
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突然食指碰到一個點，她便叫了出來，並且噴流出很多透明色的液體。215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQas2vCrmgs
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「齁齁～看來是被我找到了喔～克萊娜小姐～」215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcyUPavlkQK
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我挪到她小穴的前方，撐開她的大腿，用肉棒抵著她的肉穴門口說道：215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ93tOujs2Py
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「克萊娜小姐～我～進來囉～」215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfQYJXtZy84
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「等......等一下克里斯大......喔嗯！」215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3bySRFupbt
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我一口氣往裡面一頂，龜頭的感覺是頂到了一個肉壁的感覺，但是我的肉棒還有一些些在外面。215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡy30bRyCriF
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「嗯～看來是高潮到子宮下垂了，這該怎麼辦才好啊克萊娜小姐？」215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfodCe1zDP7
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「啊嗯......克里斯先生，我想歇會兒可以.....姆嗯！」215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbuJogpFVAU
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「當然是不行啊，妳要幫我想想看怎麼讓我的老二呆在妳的小淫穴裡，不然我的老二露出來的部分可沒地方擺啊！」215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcZX9ez0KP6
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我一邊說一邊抽插著，並且在剛剛我摸到她敏感的部位我還適時地用龜頭邊的皺褶去頂，她的表情從原本很享受變得全身無力，現在的她已經是成大自行躺在床上，像是洩了氣的人偶一般。215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyafwcjgXKM
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「欸妳這樣我都還沒玩夠妳就坍了，不行，得想想辦法。門外的女僕會治癒術的進來一下好嗎？」215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡz7QycCGZMR
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一個看上去年紀約二十初的女僕小姐走進來，淡定的說：215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtn42Onm8zc
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「請問有何吩咐？勇者大人？」215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXQRO3LTVVQ
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「給克萊娜小姐上治癒或是回復術，她失神了。」215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡthMLR0G1z6
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「等......等一」215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcUOd29HP9c
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克萊娜似乎想說甚麼，我便將她抱起，呈互相對坐的姿勢，我抱著轉向女僕說：215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ95eSLlN94J
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「ＯＫ，可以連我都一起放喔。」215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOvHwva4ZW8
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「好的，大治癒術！」215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYOCJKpHhbY
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施展完後，我感覺剛剛因為跳舞跟對克萊娜前面的動作所耗的體力都全部恢復，而我也發現克萊娜正緊緊的抱著我，並且在床上的腿還努力的撐著，似乎很怕一失去支點就會被頂穿的感覺。215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTdEhFhvZsQ
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「克萊娜，我覺得我們似乎很合得來耶，妳的肉穴、胸跟唇真的都超棒的。」215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZOQktS7Oka
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「是......是嗎？謝謝勇者大人的愛戴，但是我身為大祭師，明天還有一些公事需要處理，所以今天就先這......等等克利斯大人，現在不可以起身！」215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwNzDVZOn4n
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我抱著她站了起來，緩緩移動到窗台旁的牆壁，我用手抵著她兩隻腳跨著的地方，她則是緊緊的抱著我說道：215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLGBJRZRtQG
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「克里斯大人！拜託您我想要休息，啊嗯啊嗯～啊嗯，嗚嗯.......啾嗯......哈啊......克里斯.......大人......不要......拜託您.......」215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡShVWj7pSII
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我一邊抽插著她一邊將舌頭伸進她的嘴裡不斷攪弄。215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxScbFscDhp
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最後，我感覺要射出來前，我坐回床上，她的腳正想要放在床上時，我便連她的腳跟身體一同抱住，她用失神又詫異的表情看著我時，我便輕輕的在她耳邊說：215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVoTlJx21Ui
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「妳想要的寶寶汁來囉，不要漏接了。」215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ98L3rKsOXJ
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「等等，現在射的話我會.......嗚啾嗯！」215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtmBdNWBHjq
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