一、請簡單自我介紹，列出喜歡的作品跟創作類型：254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoiNdOqeVs6
你好,我是泗楓,從國中開始寫小說至今254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡssPAgJOjqN
目前喜歡的作品是男子高中生的日常254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRW022CEsEV
創作的類型偏向奇幻日常254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQl3jCS9lqa
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二、請簡述本次活動想提出討論的作品內容角色設定：254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡI8hLUK3MkC
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劇情重要衝突與阻礙（請提供作品章節連結）：魔王與勇者方是對立 但是勇者方是不道德的一方254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpLEZT9rmju
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主角目標與成長：找到魔王並協助消滅勇者方254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtodBR6Vpml
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想提出討論的開車章節（含預備車）：每一篇的18+內容254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5xEyJ5LxOI
自覺開車不順的點（整體論，非特定章節）：開起來感覺像是傳動軸有問題 卡卡的 說不上來哪裡有問題254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKXiUTpwQIi
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三、你是下面哪個類型的車手？254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtgZsfK9pKj
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◎ 有開車但覺得不太順暢的新米車手254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡH90pT5HDB9
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原本想寫的車但沒開成的篇幅，請寫300字概念大綱，254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcVTtfjvWfG
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原版想加入開車場景的篇幅擴寫，一千字起跳。254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxYYOn4ZGM5
突然一陣風括起，我看克萊娜微微顫抖的肩膀，將他們給我穿的西裝外套脫下給她披上，她有些訝異的看了看我後，便將外套往內拉包裹住自己說：254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡid2fVLoPW0
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「謝謝你勇者大人，您真的很溫柔呢。召喚到您真的是我國最大的福祉。」254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXHWavWoz8v
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「克萊娜小姐......」254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTa9l1WJdJw
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「勇者......克里斯大人。」254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMl62OyGVAc
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我輕輕扶起她的下巴，慢慢地親吻她濕潤朱紅的唇。254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDN7jhIokg0
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「嗯，克里斯大人，您下午說的事情......嗯啾，我們去房間說吧。」254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiDCzPvzyNO
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我一邊品嘗著她柔嫩且溫潤的雙唇，一邊將她抱起從一旁小道走回我的房間，將門關上以及窗簾拉上後，我便將她放在床上。254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3iUL3U9I9v
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「克里斯......大人，姆嗯，等我，阿恩～」254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0za71zHp6E
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「沒事，我幫妳脫吧。」254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgFUuVXgYlj
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我將自己的衣服褲子瞬間解開脫掉後，便上到了床，一邊持續的親吻一邊利索的將她的禮服後的拉鍊往下拉，此時她傲人的雙胸挾帶著兩朵白峰上的紅暈及小巧紅潤的尖頭。254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkcH7aBzjjA
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看到後我便順勢的從她白皙的頸部一挑逗至她敏感且柔潤的雙胸。254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKOmFUfQP6J
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「啊～克里斯大人，乳頭不可以，嗯......啊嗯，不可以咬啦～」254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLkCSDwfJyP
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用門牙輕輕的左右咬著她並且持續像是吸卡住珍珠的粗吸管一樣用力，一隻手搓揉另一球之外，另一隻手緩緩的伸到她敏感且似乎剛剛有處理過、摸上去還有些渣人的陰毛處。254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKdOJ9L025v
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「啊嗯，這樣吸不會有母乳的～，除非......」254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZJwPaWVISN
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她很大方的打開了大腿，我的手也停在了她的小穴門口，她的手撐著她的大腿，嬌喘的說道：254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyHqqpchPgx
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「克里斯大人能把你雄偉的肉棒放入這個淫亂的小穴裡......」254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPyM5KWbva9
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「嗯？我沒有聽清楚妳的需求喔，我沒有打算讓妳懷上我的小孩耶，我只想吸這對該死又舒服的奶子，妳最好在詳細的描述一下妳的需求比較好喔。」254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡI4mb1IFb1O
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我撐起身子，看著她嬌喘且淫亂的表情，我笑著一邊說一邊用早已勃起很久的肉棒貼近她的肉穴附近來回的轉，就是不插入。254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7MXXBwQzCi
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看著她似乎很著急但是也不知道要說些甚麼，而她要說話時我便一嘴親住她的唇，並且將舌頭粗暴的伸進她的嘴裡一直攪和著。254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGyvAYvMpYQ
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「嗚嗯......啾......哈啊......哈啊嗯～克里蘇.....大人......嗚嗯！啾.......嗚啾......哈啊哈......克利斯大人，我.......我......嗯～」254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡls7iiLygYX
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「妳不說清楚我怎麼知道妳要做甚麼呢？克萊娜小姐？」254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLRoGNiPBaT
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我伸著蛇頭緩緩的離開，並從她的舌上拉出一條長長的細絲，她像是失了神的說：254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVBgfvKteWM
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「克里斯大人......您真的......很厲害呢......人家已經......去了好幾次......明明都還沒插入......嗯嗯～克里斯大人，您的手指！啊嗯～～」254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkf2m7LdvWn
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「是喔？我確認看看？」254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5miozn9yA6
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沒等她說完我便將兩隻手指緩緩的滑入她的肉穴之中，然後在裏頭一上一下的往前撫摸著。254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡG1QREjhmn3
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「等一下克里斯大人，我才剛去，啊嗯！那裡！不行！」254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaDCpvCnc4Y
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突然食指碰到一個點，她便叫了出來，並且噴流出很多透明色的液體。254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnCRNIr5Cpo
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「齁齁～看來是被我找到了喔～克萊娜小姐～」254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYXx54lw43c
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我挪到她小穴的前方，撐開她的大腿，用肉棒抵著她的肉穴門口說道：254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQXJLjVgadd
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「克萊娜小姐～我～進來囉～」254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ49s09kYqVc
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「等......等一下克里斯大......喔嗯！」254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVQnUqTJ59b
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我一口氣往裡面一頂，龜頭的感覺是頂到了一個肉壁的感覺，但是我的肉棒還有一些些在外面。254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡd24PHnkWiB
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「嗯～看來是高潮到子宮下垂了，這該怎麼辦才好啊克萊娜小姐？」254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTkqZX5sxMK
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「啊嗯......克里斯先生，我想歇會兒可以.....姆嗯！」254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9oQBwMmV1v
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「當然是不行啊，妳要幫我想想看怎麼讓我的老二呆在妳的小淫穴裡，不然我的老二露出來的部分可沒地方擺啊！」254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdNW52Zhw7G
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我一邊說一邊抽插著，並且在剛剛我摸到她敏感的部位我還適時地用龜頭邊的皺褶去頂，她的表情從原本很享受變得全身無力，現在的她已經是成大自行躺在床上，像是洩了氣的人偶一般。254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfy3pw9EE5D
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「欸妳這樣我都還沒玩夠妳就坍了，不行，得想想辦法。門外的女僕會治癒術的進來一下好嗎？」254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2C3aWOorwf
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一個看上去年紀約二十初的女僕小姐走進來，淡定的說：254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIROhUmMn0m
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「請問有何吩咐？勇者大人？」254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡanbBnYuBna
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「給克萊娜小姐上治癒或是回復術，她失神了。」254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZe2DdBxXcG
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「等......等一」254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2GTz2MpkpJ
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克萊娜似乎想說甚麼，我便將她抱起，呈互相對坐的姿勢，我抱著轉向女僕說：254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡV5OYclGqyE
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「ＯＫ，可以連我都一起放喔。」254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQSdiRvbxYO
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「好的，大治癒術！」254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡz7uz0lkid1
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施展完後，我感覺剛剛因為跳舞跟對克萊娜前面的動作所耗的體力都全部恢復，而我也發現克萊娜正緊緊的抱著我，並且在床上的腿還努力的撐著，似乎很怕一失去支點就會被頂穿的感覺。254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQbz1Xw52Vc
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「克萊娜，我覺得我們似乎很合得來耶，妳的肉穴、胸跟唇真的都超棒的。」254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrAokPDdaA1
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「是......是嗎？謝謝勇者大人的愛戴，但是我身為大祭師，明天還有一些公事需要處理，所以今天就先這......等等克利斯大人，現在不可以起身！」254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuBQowXrqp1
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我抱著她站了起來，緩緩移動到窗台旁的牆壁，我用手抵著她兩隻腳跨著的地方，她則是緊緊的抱著我說道：254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQvFYfuTTmV
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「克里斯大人！拜託您我想要休息，啊嗯啊嗯～啊嗯，嗚嗯.......啾嗯......哈啊......克里斯.......大人......不要......拜託您.......」254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡd6hRqOU1ZX
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我一邊抽插著她一邊將舌頭伸進她的嘴裡不斷攪弄。254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡa0P8joQ4GI
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最後，我感覺要射出來前，我坐回床上，她的腳正想要放在床上時，我便連她的腳跟身體一同抱住，她用失神又詫異的表情看著我時，我便輕輕的在她耳邊說：254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSqIITvEOd1
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「妳想要的寶寶汁來囉，不要漏接了。」254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAq83FjRcfT
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「等等，現在射的話我會.......嗚啾嗯！」254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0CoapIm7h1
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我用力的往她子宮一頂，精子就像尿急憋了五分鐘一樣找到廁所時用力尿出來的感覺樣，然後我再她說完前便再次將舌頭伸進她的嘴裡，我看著她的表情從失神到整個眼球都翻白了過去。254Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSHoF3Xzh7T
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