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Linkle's Great Adventure
Writer Kokiri-Hylian-Hero
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It Begins
Kokiri-Hylian-Hero
Oct 24, 2016
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simagination - Sorry I couldn't read all of this, I don't really go well with longer stories. I'm a HW and Linkle fan, though, so I had to check this out. I like the concept and the fact that you don't seem to pretend like every other person magically knows her story from the game, but that you fill the reader in little by little. I did notice some spelling and punctuation errors early on, since that's how far I came for now. That ' tilde is very nasty when it comes to abbreviations that can look like other words, like I'll and ill, your and you're (gotta watch out for those!)
2 years agoreply

Kokiri-Hylian-Hero - It's alright, I'm glad you gave it a look at all, this is pretty long, on FanFiction.net I've posted fourteen(?) chapters of this, plus two spin offs, so...yeah, that'll be a lot.

Yeah, I think I saw what you're talking about, I've got some stuff to fix, huh?


2 years agoreply

simagination - Take your time :)
2 years agoreply

Kokiri-Hylian-Hero - @simagination, I've been meaning to bring in the rest, don't know why it's taking me so long.
2 years agoreply

Kokiri-Hylian-Hero - @simagination, Okay, I've gotten the story up to date, all fifteen chapters!
2 years agoreply

simagination - @Kokiri-Hylian-Hero, Way to go XD
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Kokiri-Hylian-Hero - @simagination, Thanks! I spotted several errors, while posting them, though, so I need to go back and fix more stuff.
2 years agoreply

Flow - I love it :D
2 years agoreply

Kokiri-Hylian-Hero - I'm happy to hear it! Hopefully I'll be able to update to what's on FF so far, something like fourteen chapters, so it might be a while.
2 years agoreply

Flow - @Kokiri-Hylian-Hero,
I don't think I've made anything longer than five chapters *nervous laugh*
My followers must hate me. Or forgot I even existed :/
2 years agoreply

Kokiri-Hylian-Hero - @JellyKat, Oh, I've got a few of my own that I need to update...one day!
2 years agoreply

Flow - @Kokiri-Hylian-Hero, One day it'll happen.... Probably( not)
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Kokiri-Hylian-Hero - @JellyKat, It's a nice daydream for me, at least...to finish everything I start.
2 years agoreply

Seamus Brown - while reading this i kept imagining our role play days.... your style of role play shows here 
2 years agoreply

Kokiri-Hylian-Hero - Oh, really? I guess I've been writing a while, I guess I've been consistent since at least when I first role played, or would you say role playing helped me grow as a writer?
2 years agoreply

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