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Romance can't be that bad... Can it?
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Romance can't be that bad... Can it?
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Perfection At It's Most Perfect
Jane Glass
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Hi, my name is Nusustupid, I'm a 23 y/o different and weird alien from the planet Genuious, a nice and pretty and kind place with other nice and kind aliens. As I mentioned before, I'm not like them. I'm...emo, and girly, and different. Like a special snow flake, I formed in a prettier way, but I'm too unique for them. Today I prove myself to them. Today I show them who is the boss!100Please respect copyright.PENANAaiPw04gUHr
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Suddenly we are finally arriving to the earth where the humans below scream in terror and happiness. They know that I am their goddess and I shall do what is the good thing to do, as always.100Please respect copyright.PENANAwO1ck0d4bL
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But as the ship thing we're in lands, I spot a nearby man human person with adorable and cute spiky hair in the front and longer hair in the back, falling onto his kind of large shoulders. I walk forward, in a trance. He is perfect, with his messy hair, and kind of tilted eyes. I smile, knowing he is my person who I should marry with.100Please respect copyright.PENANAg7PQ5oE8qI
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Ours orbs meet, his orbs a overly bright green...it's almost blinding. I move forward, My orbs fluttering shut, like a butterflies wings, to avoid losing my vision to his wonderful gazes.100Please respect copyright.PENANADA0t61xnWf
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He leans forward and we kiss like in the fairy tales--not the ones with people who die and get their eyes poked out, or have their toes cut off to wear high heels--and it's perfect, like everything else is. I back up, the sunshine overhead shining directly on him. Is he an angel, sent to me straight from the heavens?  100Please respect copyright.PENANAPs3QFoRSs2
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He glances over to the ship, though, ruining our perfectness, "Are you going to take over?"100Please respect copyright.PENANAEJauzfSdoi
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"Oh, yes--you don't mind do you? I promise we aliens won't hurt humans, please, say you don't mind!"100Please respect copyright.PENANAW1SXuZZ2nV
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He met my orbs again, and I blush, "Of course I don't mind. Take my planet, you're my goddess, Nusustupid." He whispered quietly as he lowered his voice.100Please respect copyright.PENANAicnm33KVWd
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He's perfect. I thought quietly as I grab his hand and pull him back to the ship with me. And we live happily ever after and everything is perfect.100Please respect copyright.PENANAXAW75vnXJL
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Comments ( 8 )

Kokiri-Hylian-Hero - Oh my gosh, her name looks like it'd be pronounced "You so stupid", or so similar, that if I was hearing it for the first time, I might do a double take! Come to think of it, the planet looks like I'd think someone meant "Genius", if I didn't know the proper spelling...so what's the guy's name?

Also, I love how the princess read Cinderella, cutting heels off and big toes and eyes getting poked out, nice reference to yet another love story!

Have to admit, the butterfly's wings thing kind of...didn't seem bad, but the orbs repeated more than made up for it!
1 year agoreply

Jane Glass - Thank you! Idk how I didn't see the comments before? And yes the pronunciations are as dumb as they seem. ^^
2 weeks agoreply

Kokiri-Hylian-Hero - @Jane Glass, You're welcome! I was surprised to see my comment get a reply. Ooof, thanks for confirming that for me. XD
2 weeks agoreply

Jane Glass - @Kokiri-Hylian-Hero,Yeah, I'm still not sure how I didn't see it sooner...  Np! Glad you liked my story that I worked so hard on XD
1 week agoreply

Maria3313 - I can't believe all the plot holes... And the ORBS. This is amazingly terrible. 10/10
1 year agoreply

Jane Glass - Thank you, I really tried. :D


(and sorry for never seeing this comment somehow)
2 weeks agoreply

Flow - Of course I don't mind that you are taking over my whole plant. Why would I? 
1 year agoreply

Jane Glass - He's in lurv, so it's okay.
2 weeks agoreply

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