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※ 作品日更中,目前已破 50 連更,正在挑戰百更~227Please respect copyright.PENANAjZnVPVqyHe
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殷璃某天醒來發現自己穿越了,227Please respect copyright.PENANAsaR4qkJyJk
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必須和眼前這群美男們為愛鼓掌,227Please respect copyright.PENANAPBwqaNJnMF
否則就會小命不保?
天知道,她連個男朋友都沒交過!227Please respect copyright.PENANAzSj9GWUcZI
難道不能先從害羞地牽牽小手開始嗎?
突如其來且無限吃到飽的肉227Please respect copyright.PENANA1hl66ktBvv
根本就打算撐死她吧!?227Please respect copyright.PENANACwaQfiU9BJ
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對這個創挑觀望好久後終於鼓起勇氣參加,227Please respect copyright.PENANAfjx280gKqR
雖然碼字有段時間了,但今年才開始認真寫,227Please respect copyright.PENANAN7nhENjJyI
也是六月時才成為蕉友,227Please respect copyright.PENANAWTCynCprVQ
心態上還是把自己定位為初心者,227Please respect copyright.PENANARcNdk6wHZV
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自己覺得劇情和設定還算完整,227Please respect copyright.PENANA3mOqTDj0Fo
但因為是大長篇,227Please respect copyright.PENANA5LOQYwvnzF
為了鋪陳情節開頭敘事偏向緩慢,227Please respect copyright.PENANAlKwzKxDwN5
也擔心自己是否有細節太多讓讀者不耐煩的情況。227Please respect copyright.PENANA5QJOpBXobg
任何閱讀體驗或心得,227Please respect copyright.PENANA91NSby7vNf
都還請主辦大大和各方路人不吝點評指教 🙏227Please respect copyright.PENANAI8p5LazXAY
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希望參加的大家至少都因為這個挑戰227Please respect copyright.PENANAPPcYwWORJf
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