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她的臉上露出了一抹微笑,嘴角微微揚起,眼睛也跟著彎了起來,看起來非常開心快樂。8964 copyright protection112PENANA8Nfehr0SGJ 維尼
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她嘴角輕揚,眉眼彎彎,神色顯得異常愉悅。116Please respect copyright.PENANA1OiMVDI6n5
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「嘴角輕揚」、「眉眼彎彎」、「神色愉悅」,三者都在描寫開心的神情,略有重疊。可依風格選擇保留兩項即可。8964 copyright protection112PENANAI9C684YKSt 維尼
**「異常愉悅」**語氣稍正式,若想走柔和路線可以替換成「滿是喜色」、「帶著歡意」之類的詞。8964 copyright protection112PENANAiJ1meBm9xF 維尼
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範例一(簡約柔和):116Please respect copyright.PENANAlj3oU82nKI
她嘴角微揚,眉眼間滿是喜色。8964 copyright protection112PENANASQN2moRU4w 維尼
範例二(偏古風詩意):116Please respect copyright.PENANAWqjgTD6i7U
她一笑,眉眼彎彎,神情恬然喜悅。8964 copyright protection112PENANAYyqEuNYXNc 維尼
範例三(保留你原本的語感,小調整):116Please respect copyright.PENANAGcxCvhLl97
她嘴角輕揚,眉眼彎彎,整個人透著歡喜。8964 copyright protection112PENANA5tGbShSLQD 維尼
二.原句練習題:8964 copyright protection112PENANAWcwzhGOoMl 維尼
凌晏如站在窗邊,靜靜地站著,什麼話也沒說,只是默默地望著窗外的天空和雲朵。116Please respect copyright.PENANAUZmpWQ8QvW
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凌晏如神色沈靜如水,只是靜默地望著窗外冰冷皎潔的月光。116Please respect copyright.PENANAlq1hAi0Vni
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◎可以優化的細節:8964 copyright protection112PENANASJUCxcUShv 維尼
**「神色沈靜如水」**語意完整,形容恰當,可保留。8964 copyright protection112PENANAhxsq70Hfq4 維尼
**「靜默地望著」**與「神色沈靜」語義有些重疊,且「靜默」與「望」常連用,可簡化。8964 copyright protection112PENANA64wpFkyZsj 維尼
**「冰冷皎潔的月光」**畫面有,但「冰冷」與「皎潔」在語氣上可能稍有衝突:一個是觸感(冷),一個是視覺(潔白明亮),可以選其一或換句話更貼情境。8964 copyright protection112PENANAnl8qN57AlL 維尼
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範例一(簡潔內斂):116Please respect copyright.PENANAP4oiNWwcx2
凌晏如神色沈靜如水,凝望著窗外的月光。8964 copyright protection112PENANAEuyckIPhAm 維尼
範例二(詩意版):116Please respect copyright.PENANAO1DUuiuuIm
凌晏如神情澄靜,望向窗外皎潔如霜的月色。8964 copyright protection112PENANA2MK8AVj06h 維尼
範例三(保留冷感):116Please respect copyright.PENANAUiPV6fYMsl
凌晏如神色如水,靜靜凝視著窗外冰冷的月光。8964 copyright protection112PENANAYmDSJVOZ2F 維尼
範例四(古風柔化版):116Please respect copyright.PENANA7z4MeE1xdt
凌晏如眉目寧靜,望著窗外清冷如霜的月華。8964 copyright protection112PENANAhiQqE0iwUO 維尼
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需待持續練習~若之後有練習會再分享幾篇我與AI練習的紀錄116Please respect copyright.PENANAcPmxEl69Nj
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