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呃,完結了。我的第一篇長篇完結了。8964 copyright protection19PENANAB8lBD2Kl4w 維尼
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很奇妙的心情,好像早就知道有這麼一天,這天卻突然來到。但很高興,有種成就感。8964 copyright protection19PENANAw0kLT6bsBq 維尼
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當初這故事的想法是來自新海誠的《言葉之庭》,但《言葉之庭》著重在男女情感上較少。而市面上師生戀的題材似乎不多,就算有也幾乎是男老師和女學生。而且通常都是一般的戀愛故事。8964 copyright protection19PENANAirPvN8MUsO 維尼
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但我想看女老師和男學生戀愛,又不是普通的戀愛故事,所以我只好自己寫。這也是我第一次嘗試寫小說這回事。8964 copyright protection19PENANAjNTDOjFRcr 維尼
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故事裡想傳達的某些東西則多少被《青春豬頭少年系列》影響。8964 copyright protection19PENANADOWmr6Qcgg 維尼
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《言葉之庭》+《青春豬頭少年系列》,所以《我和老師的青春戀愛。是吧?》誕生了。8964 copyright protection19PENANAJa8UO9fDlg 維尼
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這是一個「漸漸失去生命的女人」和「漸漸失去夢想的少年」,相互拯救彼此的故事。8964 copyright protection19PENANAjBpRpN2Avt 維尼
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故事前期是老師拯救張澈,後來張澈成長之後拯救老師。簡單來說就是這樣。8964 copyright protection19PENANAkVbOimztiR 維尼
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所以當初在構想的時候,為了讓張澈能拯救老師,我就安排老師「生病」這回事。還問了專業的朋友有沒有好構思劇情的病名。結果得來的答案讓我哭笑不得。8964 copyright protection19PENANAAtbESNNj3S 維尼
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現在醫學太發達了。這就是答案。8964 copyright protection19PENANATtyHGBdF1V 維尼
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基本上沒有什麼能符合的病。就連移植手術這回事成功率幾乎百分之百。8964 copyright protection19PENANAdITAisfUdz 維尼
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當然這是好事。醫學發達對人類來說可是好事。8964 copyright protection19PENANABYM721qb8H 維尼
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所以我只好選了一個難在其他部份(等候移植)又不太影響劇情的病。8964 copyright protection19PENANA2R6m7t1T6D 維尼
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在收集資料的時候,對於移植這回事,我自己也多少出現些看法。所以也在故事中,丟了點需要思考的問題。8964 copyright protection19PENANAmoYSUFYuH2 維尼
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再來說到關於老師的生死問題,當然這也有關我的生死問題。(刀片。好啦,其實這不是主要原因XD)8964 copyright protection19PENANAa6imuYZLlX 維尼
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一開始的想法,我的確是想發便當的。8964 copyright protection19PENANA7zCMMaC5S3 維尼
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因為老師死掉,身為作者我一定心痛死。我都會心痛了,讀者肯定也會。我是這麼想的。8964 copyright protection19PENANAE1cZ65Lhe5 維尼
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能把自己的心情傳達給讀者一直都是我的目標之一。8964 copyright protection19PENANA8Rt4xIhJeH 維尼
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嗯,但我失敗了。8964 copyright protection19PENANAlu6OivomDH 維尼
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因為老師這角色我真的太喜歡了,但喜歡只是我不發便當的其中一個原因。8964 copyright protection19PENANAodhulJSr8X 維尼
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還有一個原因就是——8964 copyright protection19PENANAVkBHIYRY8p 維尼
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為何我要發?8964 copyright protection19PENANAZN1V0HqTlK 維尼
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然後我仔細想了一下,我寫這故事是為了什麼。8964 copyright protection19PENANAZuCslI6BtC 維尼
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藉由張澈自身的問題,然後成長。這成長傳達的意義才是故事所在。8964 copyright protection19PENANAsLIoaarBR4 維尼
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如果老師一死才能讓張澈成長,那不管再喜歡,我就是會賜死。8964 copyright protection19PENANA4GtrHItBvf 維尼
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不過,張澈的確是不用在老師死的狀態下就能成長的。所以,我讓老師活著。8964 copyright protection19PENANA5TuLaS3qqP 維尼
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(如果有人能感受到張澈的成長,我會很開心XD)8964 copyright protection19PENANAjNVodeLnYo 維尼
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就像有人一直在爭論《你的名字》最後為何要讓男、女主角相見。那根本不是新海誠。《秒速五公分》才是經典。8964 copyright protection19PENANA89PNZo0FSI 維尼
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那是因為這兩個故事想傳達的意義根本不同。8964 copyright protection19PENANAEmWSfllwJ8 維尼
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《秒五》就是想描述人都有各自的路要走。所以忘記過去,放眼未來。是他想傳達的東西。自然新海誠在最後也不會讓男、女主相見。8964 copyright protection19PENANA0wDcYIDuDO 維尼
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而《你的名字》想說的和《秒五》不同,結局當然也會不同。8964 copyright protection19PENANAQ4QcYqDN1E 維尼
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抱歉,離題了。我只是想說我在寫每個橋段都是有意義的。8964 copyright protection19PENANAqrJRDbJ84E 維尼
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當然選擇讓老師不死,我就要開始煩惱如何去合理化了。但基本上不可能。8964 copyright protection19PENANA65TNRQhwLz 維尼
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我能做到的就是合理安排——「如何讓張澈不要『明白』老師有沒有死這件事。」8964 copyright protection19PENANAv8eyzdmten 維尼
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而老師得救這件事,就只能委託奇蹟了。8964 copyright protection19PENANApExbFzV6x2 維尼
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幸好,現實有時比故事還離奇。8964 copyright protection19PENANAzzgX8H81dU 維尼
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老師獲救的過程,是真的有被報導過的新聞。這成了我的參考,也是種安慰。8964 copyright protection19PENANAwT19FK8bRd 維尼
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更重要的是——8964 copyright protection19PENANAnILbRAyWYn 維尼
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我寫的是「青春」、「戀愛」、帶點「歡樂」題材的「輕」小說。8964 copyright protection19PENANAhxk9qmQPGh 維尼
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讓讀者讀起來輕鬆開心是很重要的。8964 copyright protection19PENANAad405LzdPQ 維尼
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所以我才說輕小說這本質不會變。8964 copyright protection19PENANALSbb9uUOxk 維尼
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總之,謝謝一直有在觀看的大家。23Please respect copyright.PENANArdh7bO83k1
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(現在的我:如果想看痛一點的故事,可以看番外篇的《那天我被孕婦搭訕了。》)23Please respect copyright.PENANA8vSEFN4nx5
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