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當我醒來之際,我還在夢裡頭
霓詩
Jul 6, 2017
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莫須無 - 感謝妳的參與。
其實我這次的題目是在於以本身「自己」作為基準,不是以第三方的角色來闡述。
劇情很好,開頭也取的能讓人想點進去看。
但有一個小地方,也就是當人在說話的時候,加上引號「 」會比較讓人明瞭。

3 years agoreply

霓詩 - Ok,感謝指點。
3 years agoreply

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