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The Sun & Moon
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Who are they..?
Chat Noir
Jul 17, 2017
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Chat Noir - If you don't like it, then don't read it
1 year agoreply

Lunassandra Hughes - The im is driving me insane. You know how to use an apostrophe clearly but not for the I'm. Again, I'm more into formal writings so the informality throws me a bit. The characters appear erratic and I'm running into the problem of not recalling who they are supposed to be. None of them seem particularly like-able, not yet at least.
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