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詭話,鬼話
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Contest Holder 魚*
Challenger Cecilio Jay
Challenger 霓詩
Challenger 孟孟
Challenger 不知名的角落_林茵
Challenger 檸檬綠
Challenger 糖凌
Challenger Omen
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  • G: General Audiences
  • PG: Parental Guidance Suggested
  • PG-13: Parents Strongly Cautioned
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詭話,鬼話

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#5

惡穴血鬥

Cecilio Jay
Comments ( 10 )
魚兒 - 第一句我居然想歪了😂😂
3 years ago
Cecilio Jay - 想成啥哈哈
3 years ago
魚兒 - @Richard Jay,人身上的……😂😂
3 years ago
Cecilio Jay - @李芳妤,差太遠了吧哈哈……
3 years ago
糖凌 - 還沒死??@@表示還有續集??
3 years ago
Cecilio Jay - @糖凌 有啊~等等我今天趕出來XDDD 
3 years ago
比良坂 - 打鬥的過程非常棒,氣味、聲音、撞擊、喘息都讓人身入其境,如果結尾可以收得更強烈點,應該能與前面的快節奏更加契合
3 years ago
Cecilio Jay - 好哦謝謝……(其實沒寫完
3 years ago
比良坂 - @Richard Jay,原來 ^^.....
難怪有股意猶未盡的感覺
3 years ago
Cecilio Jay - @比良坂,哈哈真的
3 years ago
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