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送神祭
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Aug 2, 2017
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兀心 - 這送神祭頗有日本慶典的感覺呢XDDDDD不過既然都稱神社了我想設定上本來就是日本神了吧?雖然土地神這種稱呼一直給我有種中國道廟神的感覺XDDD

放煙火送神的點子不錯,雖然看到狀聲詞直接蹦出來有點爆笑(被打


結尾有種「平常都不怎麼交流的同學忽然要在畢業典禮上玩得特別開心」的感覺(太繞口啦),大概是這種古怪的落寞感吧。不過從這篇故事看不見村民們在此之前和白爺的互動與在送神祭時相比有什麼差別就是了,感覺上少了一點反差的效果。
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