A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANARDe2qGuw1r
謝謝你,不過我這篇沒名字欸—519Please respect copyright.PENANABzGymilcHE
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANA9XY0r6CqSR
你指標題?519Please respect copyright.PENANAhyXcaLvw8z
但有時訂標題也很困難~519Please respect copyright.PENANAaajctOpJaM
就像你這一段對話(給我看的故事)到底想向讀者表達什麼,很難用十個字以來形容得完。
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANAEpQXWFSdan
嗯對啊,519Please respect copyright.PENANAsNYZP7e2Rx
所以才困擾嘛。
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANAn3XdRVR36t
那是因為,你寫的時候沒有先定主旨,519Please respect copyright.PENANAhw56H9kunM
所以沒有中心思想在。519Please respect copyright.PENANAmBiK1MetTw
我猜的對嗎?
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANA9PdWKeD79I
嗯,我所有寫出來的都是臨時起意的。519Please respect copyright.PENANAnPGjMiJxFT
所以...有時候看以前的文,都還會想著:這真是我寫過的嗎?519Please respect copyright.PENANAFgLIOzeMn8
對了,我所有的文都無題。
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANAPFOZ6Nah91
看來你真的很喜歡想這些小故事!519Please respect copyright.PENANAnl2zcVZ47R
如果是長篇故事,很難沒有主題和中心思想。
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANAj7Ke0zm7dG
那是因為我很沒耐心,只能寫短的啊!
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANALYSUYkA5YP
哈哈~真的嗎~XDD519Please respect copyright.PENANALMWtTkgXnb
我認為呢~ 只是因為這個故事你沒有材料寫不下去。519Please respect copyright.PENANAlKwcOhfHj6
所以下一次你會想到其他人發生其他的故事,519Please respect copyright.PENANAPXDfYlYv15
而不是一直把這個故事接下去,寫成長篇。
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANA7vyHtfKFtI
當然是真的啊~所以我之前的小說寫到後面全都是我朋友寫的。519Please respect copyright.PENANA3fvdPn8ZAC
說來有點不負責任,但我就是沒辦法好好寫完,因為往往都是在我還沒寫完一篇,另一篇的靈感就來了。519Please respect copyright.PENANArK6wJ53Eav
我才剛打完你就講了我要說的😂😂 狂
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANAce3yM07EuA
我指的「材料」,其實就是你「靈感」的原料。519Please respect copyright.PENANAGsBUrXQkHe
沒有「靈感」,是因為你「材料」用完了。
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANAE9HXcycy8j
那材料沒了怎麼補充啊?
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANAKpmD0SjYNq
我先教你如何準備材料,好嗎?
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANACxm3sTM1Mj
好啊。
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANAfP0rHlP8V3
如果寫作課給你一個題目:「強者和弱者」,三百字。519Please respect copyright.PENANAMbu2Whx9nn
你會想到寫什麼故事?我們看看裡面有什麼材料在。519Please respect copyright.PENANA4jBg6ShPDY
大致形容一下你想到的畫面就好。519Please respect copyright.PENANA3ftNywI7oD
這個大致形容就是你的中心思想了。
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANA8OdwujCRab
好的,519Please respect copyright.PENANAngXoWDsuvp
強者和弱者=弱肉強食的世界、519Please respect copyright.PENANAKLiJOkigWj
有關言情的武俠小說吧。
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANAUsQ0pPTuPq
『弱肉強食』是第一類材料,519Please respect copyright.PENANAi50fOZruVt
『武俠』和『言情』第二類材料。
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANADTMgTjqIHP
弱肉強食怎麼會是材料啊?
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANAeriELKyyYs
讓我配上一些東西說明吧。519Please respect copyright.PENANAEAthaFW62s
『英雄』『總裁』『乞丐』『軍人』是第三類材料519Please respect copyright.PENANAnfvXcH6oWw
有了這些材料,可以組織出故事靈感。519Please respect copyright.PENANAiQdb6N0fup
比如:519Please respect copyright.PENANAuwpLH6QROp
『乞丐』是強者,而『總裁』是弱者。519Please respect copyright.PENANAA31bkXQeBh
兩者之間發生了一個『弱肉被強食』的故事。而這是一個『言情』做主題。519Please respect copyright.PENANAIW0H1M684v
總裁被乞丐吃了(攻受意味
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANA2MRd2wHwzD
還是不懂欸
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANABNeiKkem6T
嗯...我好像舉錯例了
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANAhyAPDSFjD6
你的思維和他人不同啊…
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANA3GT4DcKJcO
『弱肉強食』描述兩個事物的互相關係519Please respect copyright.PENANALbEmtcb2gH
一個強,一個弱,對吧?
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANAtWLLO5XVsy
嗯,對啊
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANApaodHV93dU
有了這個定義之後,憑空創作出來的人物就有『身份和關聯』,519Please respect copyright.PENANAbAM15Urtbv
他們在故事裡,一個強,一個弱,強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方。
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANAbcTzZ2Ak00
強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方的話,那弱的一方是在反抗的一方嗎?
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANAxJLWhlkKaQ
這個要再看其他材料能給你什麼想像了:519Please respect copyright.PENANAMUteKgGh8A
『老虎』和『兔子』做材料的話,弱者看起來不可能反抗。519Please respect copyright.PENANAQRUtlVuBIT
但如果在放『讓弱者打敗強者』的劇本裡,就會變出弱者反抗強者的情節來。
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANALwcRvWzpuP
哦~
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANAB5Fjn99RbK
然後我就從沒靈感,變成可能想像和寫出:519Please respect copyright.PENANAGPuUcUoOiY
『一隻兔子用陷阱打敗了老虎』(配上智謀)519Please respect copyright.PENANA8irmqVIZ0Y
『一百隻兔子聯合打敗了老虎』(配上團結)519Please respect copyright.PENANAvlDlgS2BWV
的故事
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANAHVMYGR9630
好的、519Please respect copyright.PENANANubpcjx8Ce
可是這故事好誇張啊,一百隻欸!
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANAnYHnoRwGUF
哈哈~誇張是能讓你記得的套路XD
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANAME9j5DOmuM
現在,我們回來看看你原來的故事有什麼材料?又少了什麼材料? 好嗎?
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANAqOosu649r9
我的故事有少什麼嗎?
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANAjqsjf9q1RX
不知道~ 但你有興趣聽聽我的分析嗎?
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANA56aW0rDvv2
好,只要是能讓我變好的我都聽!
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANACMFcSKa42O
你想不下去,是因為這個故事只有幾個材料:519Please respect copyright.PENANAfX7OzxO80L
1.『爭執』519Please respect copyright.PENANAT9GbX0CCrR
2.『有錢人/富貴的人』519Please respect copyright.PENANAKCWgoGioXQ
3.『分手的情人(主角)』519Please respect copyright.PENANAQwtU78kEJh
4.『狠心的姐姐(主角)』519Please respect copyright.PENANA8C2QRQfcWE
5.『不孝女(主角)』
其中3-5都是文章中的"我"她與各人的關係
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANAjDXbOunDkI
嗯,對,可是這又說明了什麼嗎?
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANAtWMHH6Um9f
當主角"我"的『爭執』一完了,整個故事也就沒有其他料能用,所以發展不下去了。
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANA895PPBIT1q
那如果加入復仇呢519Please respect copyright.PENANArKus0YVins
搶她大姐的未婚夫519Please respect copyright.PENANAW9idG4Szll
怎麼樣?
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANAz1Gp9ybAa0
沒錯~要寫下去就要更多的材料。那下一章《復仇》就是你想要的標題了519Please respect copyright.PENANAFXoGRAx4mj
這一章叫《爭執》、下一章叫《復仇》……519Please respect copyright.PENANA3vG7YKsOPV
故事主軸可能就是『夏家因怨』。
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANAAIwG2GNftU
好的,了解啦
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANALvtYvNpjRH
嗯...那男主要誰?
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANAMo2O3wG7C4
不一定要有吧~?519Please respect copyright.PENANAI7fwLI1Kk9
兩個女主角又如何?
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANA8bDzuYsxSU
可是我只寫過言情小說啊…
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANAE3gd1bgnO3
比如519Please respect copyright.PENANAx313SUIF6Z
1."我(筑楓)"對夏家『復仇』519Please respect copyright.PENANA0uKhxLLh49
2.雨星又對"我"『復仇』
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANAxo604YJuth
呵呵~沒關係~材料齊集靈感到了,你就知道該怎樣寫了!519Please respect copyright.PENANAYiV6qGIOrT
(要創作男主角,也是一樣用『材料』。)XD519Please respect copyright.PENANABwWNUOU1Rm
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANAoABlV1nbvJ
只要你學懂解析自己文章裡有什麼材料,要從無沒靈感變有靈感會容易得多。 519Please respect copyright.PENANAkrvCs3tjRj
A君:519Please respect copyright.PENANAH69VNXncOo
你好厲害啊!519Please respect copyright.PENANA8Pm4iZFqro
(重新把故事編排)519Please respect copyright.PENANADvtvuZ25B9
龍晨P:519Please respect copyright.PENANAQ2OABWKdPH
你真的做很好了~剩下的請再找其他人幫你啦~519Please respect copyright.PENANAqgZFBdSx2M