A君:509Please respect copyright.PENANAQ4pLHuFor0
謝謝你,不過我這篇沒名字欸—509Please respect copyright.PENANAukXidk5E4W
龍晨P:509Please respect copyright.PENANANnNeAmzwEY
你指標題?509Please respect copyright.PENANAVYE2yBeZDD
但有時訂標題也很困難~509Please respect copyright.PENANAxFZMOT4Njl
就像你這一段對話(給我看的故事)到底想向讀者表達什麼,很難用十個字以來形容得完。
A君:509Please respect copyright.PENANADY6pJwACkh
嗯對啊,509Please respect copyright.PENANAdom7S5aIYN
所以才困擾嘛。
龍晨P:509Please respect copyright.PENANAgIc7trzNLE
那是因為,你寫的時候沒有先定主旨,509Please respect copyright.PENANAR61Ihp3Hhl
所以沒有中心思想在。509Please respect copyright.PENANAnyBmrtZ1Ya
我猜的對嗎?
A君:509Please respect copyright.PENANAJn1UYVDzVa
嗯,我所有寫出來的都是臨時起意的。509Please respect copyright.PENANAbWemVckQSS
所以...有時候看以前的文,都還會想著:這真是我寫過的嗎?509Please respect copyright.PENANA7Wx2mjZtMs
對了,我所有的文都無題。
龍晨P:509Please respect copyright.PENANAIK6nB18y26
看來你真的很喜歡想這些小故事!509Please respect copyright.PENANA9xKtdJRmcW
如果是長篇故事,很難沒有主題和中心思想。
A君:509Please respect copyright.PENANAjoXejKN7W9
那是因為我很沒耐心,只能寫短的啊!
龍晨P:509Please respect copyright.PENANAAALd18Iqny
哈哈~真的嗎~XDD509Please respect copyright.PENANAqJs3NlovD7
我認為呢~ 只是因為這個故事你沒有材料寫不下去。509Please respect copyright.PENANAAmrtk7Isn8
所以下一次你會想到其他人發生其他的故事,509Please respect copyright.PENANAD3XECgc5lF
而不是一直把這個故事接下去,寫成長篇。
A君:509Please respect copyright.PENANARbayyUZaUb
當然是真的啊~所以我之前的小說寫到後面全都是我朋友寫的。509Please respect copyright.PENANATajqfvtoYN
說來有點不負責任,但我就是沒辦法好好寫完,因為往往都是在我還沒寫完一篇,另一篇的靈感就來了。509Please respect copyright.PENANAGusvaaUVN3
我才剛打完你就講了我要說的😂😂 狂
龍晨P:509Please respect copyright.PENANAgCj1W17jKi
我指的「材料」,其實就是你「靈感」的原料。509Please respect copyright.PENANAmlXYqwXerz
沒有「靈感」,是因為你「材料」用完了。
A君:509Please respect copyright.PENANAAamvIGn1i2
那材料沒了怎麼補充啊?
龍晨P:509Please respect copyright.PENANARFG65xT6C4
我先教你如何準備材料,好嗎?
A君:509Please respect copyright.PENANAEc2aDRUPx8
好啊。
龍晨P:509Please respect copyright.PENANANlBXduMcZR
如果寫作課給你一個題目:「強者和弱者」,三百字。509Please respect copyright.PENANAwOUF6gLlNQ
你會想到寫什麼故事?我們看看裡面有什麼材料在。509Please respect copyright.PENANAJ1IuX42E1z
大致形容一下你想到的畫面就好。509Please respect copyright.PENANATmctHZ1uj3
這個大致形容就是你的中心思想了。
A君:509Please respect copyright.PENANAL1oRSeZi5f
好的,509Please respect copyright.PENANAWzvBNZR7hd
強者和弱者=弱肉強食的世界、509Please respect copyright.PENANAnJ3grLJdXg
有關言情的武俠小說吧。
龍晨P:509Please respect copyright.PENANAhwa0inurmc
『弱肉強食』是第一類材料,509Please respect copyright.PENANAluoMvTS3yJ
『武俠』和『言情』第二類材料。
A君:509Please respect copyright.PENANAhMumBeE6Nc
弱肉強食怎麼會是材料啊?
龍晨P:509Please respect copyright.PENANAnKD8AsYYMA
讓我配上一些東西說明吧。509Please respect copyright.PENANAEqfiYzPgvq
『英雄』『總裁』『乞丐』『軍人』是第三類材料509Please respect copyright.PENANATRcUIsTn0U
有了這些材料,可以組織出故事靈感。509Please respect copyright.PENANAsMrXpHwxhX
比如:509Please respect copyright.PENANA96TAxeTIFJ
『乞丐』是強者,而『總裁』是弱者。509Please respect copyright.PENANAr4jANhoZDd
兩者之間發生了一個『弱肉被強食』的故事。而這是一個『言情』做主題。509Please respect copyright.PENANAZ3AssQRF5S
總裁被乞丐吃了(攻受意味
A君:509Please respect copyright.PENANAoY7C2jidYv
還是不懂欸
龍晨P:509Please respect copyright.PENANADhnLC7FEnA
嗯...我好像舉錯例了
A君:509Please respect copyright.PENANAlOVZuOxSGh
你的思維和他人不同啊…
龍晨P:509Please respect copyright.PENANA77k5zxjG38
『弱肉強食』描述兩個事物的互相關係509Please respect copyright.PENANAmPGjstMWkr
一個強,一個弱,對吧?
A君:509Please respect copyright.PENANAzYIuU5sR8E
嗯,對啊
龍晨P:509Please respect copyright.PENANApr0gSRMbgn
有了這個定義之後,憑空創作出來的人物就有『身份和關聯』,509Please respect copyright.PENANAkOVz0I8blN
他們在故事裡,一個強,一個弱,強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方。
A君:509Please respect copyright.PENANAKx29kTK6gB
強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方的話,那弱的一方是在反抗的一方嗎?
龍晨P:509Please respect copyright.PENANAsr04X8gDCb
這個要再看其他材料能給你什麼想像了:509Please respect copyright.PENANA1EpbXqEN4p
『老虎』和『兔子』做材料的話,弱者看起來不可能反抗。509Please respect copyright.PENANAHrHR0bK7B2
但如果在放『讓弱者打敗強者』的劇本裡,就會變出弱者反抗強者的情節來。
A君:509Please respect copyright.PENANAO1LdQlGw1O
哦~
龍晨P:509Please respect copyright.PENANA1ffYY75Nvf
然後我就從沒靈感,變成可能想像和寫出:509Please respect copyright.PENANAM5dtCgjy82
『一隻兔子用陷阱打敗了老虎』(配上智謀)509Please respect copyright.PENANAcfn3pXs6UR
『一百隻兔子聯合打敗了老虎』(配上團結)509Please respect copyright.PENANAdIFBnHfzkC
的故事
A君:509Please respect copyright.PENANALXKw0F6fjL
好的、509Please respect copyright.PENANAU8Mq2KIEi6
可是這故事好誇張啊,一百隻欸!
龍晨P:509Please respect copyright.PENANAzwCgT6D9jU
哈哈~誇張是能讓你記得的套路XD
龍晨P:509Please respect copyright.PENANAQHmrObUgfQ
現在,我們回來看看你原來的故事有什麼材料?又少了什麼材料? 好嗎?
A君:509Please respect copyright.PENANAER8OT9sJAT
我的故事有少什麼嗎?
龍晨P:509Please respect copyright.PENANAZSlIyEip4b
不知道~ 但你有興趣聽聽我的分析嗎?
A君:509Please respect copyright.PENANAYmiw4hmFV5
好,只要是能讓我變好的我都聽!
龍晨P:509Please respect copyright.PENANAWdlZ3t2lnq
你想不下去,是因為這個故事只有幾個材料:509Please respect copyright.PENANAG8OcAcmjD5
1.『爭執』509Please respect copyright.PENANAwHGLgOOebG
2.『有錢人/富貴的人』509Please respect copyright.PENANA1rQ4ZRRAlO
3.『分手的情人(主角)』509Please respect copyright.PENANAJxeYdVbgxs
4.『狠心的姐姐(主角)』509Please respect copyright.PENANAyqKGyOl6H4
5.『不孝女(主角)』
其中3-5都是文章中的"我"她與各人的關係
A君:509Please respect copyright.PENANAxPoGjHKYuL
嗯,對,可是這又說明了什麼嗎?
龍晨P:509Please respect copyright.PENANAy1g4oJjs4w
當主角"我"的『爭執』一完了,整個故事也就沒有其他料能用,所以發展不下去了。
A君:509Please respect copyright.PENANAFTrgnTvbJO
那如果加入復仇呢509Please respect copyright.PENANA3dnO9Gv8L3
搶她大姐的未婚夫509Please respect copyright.PENANAbsxXTmcJ6S
怎麼樣?
龍晨P:509Please respect copyright.PENANAIPzBRnwufs
沒錯~要寫下去就要更多的材料。那下一章《復仇》就是你想要的標題了509Please respect copyright.PENANAphwM0DJB2P
這一章叫《爭執》、下一章叫《復仇》……509Please respect copyright.PENANANLOVIjmvts
故事主軸可能就是『夏家因怨』。
A君:509Please respect copyright.PENANA2OXVEKSWWQ
好的,了解啦
A君:509Please respect copyright.PENANAhFun7Prr2G
嗯...那男主要誰?
龍晨P:509Please respect copyright.PENANAZlZg1eoEF6
不一定要有吧~?509Please respect copyright.PENANALcVMYRcX4S
兩個女主角又如何?
A君:509Please respect copyright.PENANAsJbB294et9
可是我只寫過言情小說啊…
龍晨P:509Please respect copyright.PENANAA1gvt2FO3c
比如509Please respect copyright.PENANAn2GJn5g6wQ
1."我(筑楓)"對夏家『復仇』509Please respect copyright.PENANAJ9rgW8agK2
2.雨星又對"我"『復仇』
龍晨P:509Please respect copyright.PENANAEwMHRfPlPK
呵呵~沒關係~材料齊集靈感到了,你就知道該怎樣寫了!509Please respect copyright.PENANAAiTtfztJCp
(要創作男主角,也是一樣用『材料』。)XD509Please respect copyright.PENANAbAwNIhayia
龍晨P:509Please respect copyright.PENANAYEbXWRP9Tu
只要你學懂解析自己文章裡有什麼材料,要從無沒靈感變有靈感會容易得多。 509Please respect copyright.PENANAyADQucty5j
A君:509Please respect copyright.PENANAhhwded8x3s
你好厲害啊!509Please respect copyright.PENANAHaaSm2Urlr
(重新把故事編排)509Please respect copyright.PENANANYWLdghJUV
龍晨P:509Please respect copyright.PENANAeeofMDlZQV
你真的做很好了~剩下的請再找其他人幫你啦~509Please respect copyright.PENANA2KmEq2Gr3T