第1點341Please respect copyright.PENANAhz3eX2Ke0S
在法爾米亞王國篇,寫法是一個人寫出動作再接上一句話,從毛絨部落篇開始 些微改變。341Please respect copyright.PENANA5h7Xn22PLF
第2點341Please respect copyright.PENANAwirH04iGdW
改變得地方是,一句話可能分開變成多句,但是,同樣是一個人說得,並不會 造成這句話是誰說得,變成需要思考去誰說得,讓讀著能更順暢去閱讀。341Please respect copyright.PENANA7XQEdWhXDl
第3點341Please respect copyright.PENANAbRjrLartOv
例如:341Please respect copyright.PENANAg4eCvUXSYZ
米莉亞拿到了信,心裡想著。341Please respect copyright.PENANAWG0x5olBKr
「嗯──」341Please respect copyright.PENANAEN6HK7vFqC
「該怎麼辦呢?」341Please respect copyright.PENANA1GrZnVro7n
米莉亞把信捏成了一團。341Please respect copyright.PENANAf88ZmPss8J
「嘛──,算了,不管它了。」341Please respect copyright.PENANA3A7hrXvkLr
變成了可能兩句話,與多描寫動作。341Please respect copyright.PENANAo17cKSCcTQ
不會像法爾米亞王國篇,一個動作一個人,下一個就是不同種人的這種情形。341Please respect copyright.PENANA1O9WwzEIMZ
例如:341Please respect copyright.PENANA6F3ymWnGhz
米莉亞拿到一封信。341Please respect copyright.PENANAXG2UwUyVdc
「嗯──,嘛──,算了,不管它了。」341Please respect copyright.PENANAdEStqG4aph
三河願表示。341Please respect copyright.PENANAKzL7l2YIKI
「那可是一封情書耶。」341Please respect copyright.PENANAoA6a2D6m2x
第4點341Please respect copyright.PENANA2DpAkHphzg
作者不是中文系畢業,所以可能比較詞窮,請包含,接下來是毛絨部落篇。341Please respect copyright.PENANAHsK5Ri2bsi