第1點340Please respect copyright.PENANAX3M8LrpSwA
在法爾米亞王國篇,寫法是一個人寫出動作再接上一句話,從毛絨部落篇開始 些微改變。340Please respect copyright.PENANANoS9nP8PMO
第2點340Please respect copyright.PENANA5Pj5jFJRB0
改變得地方是,一句話可能分開變成多句,但是,同樣是一個人說得,並不會 造成這句話是誰說得,變成需要思考去誰說得,讓讀著能更順暢去閱讀。340Please respect copyright.PENANAJG4JkgylKm
第3點340Please respect copyright.PENANAvvClgGKNeR
例如:340Please respect copyright.PENANAuObzTiltgg
米莉亞拿到了信,心裡想著。340Please respect copyright.PENANAZhBit6Tbc6
「嗯──」340Please respect copyright.PENANAWItQvTKAtb
「該怎麼辦呢?」340Please respect copyright.PENANAmouPD8HgJm
米莉亞把信捏成了一團。340Please respect copyright.PENANAnxikkiMCuO
「嘛──,算了,不管它了。」340Please respect copyright.PENANA3B5XP8wkaa
變成了可能兩句話,與多描寫動作。340Please respect copyright.PENANAHXbEYNjAm9
不會像法爾米亞王國篇,一個動作一個人,下一個就是不同種人的這種情形。340Please respect copyright.PENANAsdH89GtiGU
例如:340Please respect copyright.PENANAzFxOeFSase
米莉亞拿到一封信。340Please respect copyright.PENANATu7aQn3TIR
「嗯──,嘛──,算了,不管它了。」340Please respect copyright.PENANA8zY3vmmNFU
三河願表示。340Please respect copyright.PENANAdHWfVmTCcm
「那可是一封情書耶。」340Please respect copyright.PENANAO6nQK4w9W8
第4點340Please respect copyright.PENANAlz3EIFNkSB
作者不是中文系畢業,所以可能比較詞窮,請包含,接下來是毛絨部落篇。340Please respect copyright.PENANAlHHpbuIzBW