第1點335Please respect copyright.PENANAzOGRM2f55I
在法爾米亞王國篇,寫法是一個人寫出動作再接上一句話,從毛絨部落篇開始 些微改變。335Please respect copyright.PENANAZmsFKyhOgq
第2點335Please respect copyright.PENANAMysOTrcGPb
改變得地方是,一句話可能分開變成多句,但是,同樣是一個人說得,並不會 造成這句話是誰說得,變成需要思考去誰說得,讓讀著能更順暢去閱讀。335Please respect copyright.PENANAMi9T25uqfK
第3點335Please respect copyright.PENANAjse0bNVEVg
例如:335Please respect copyright.PENANAN58fpufUnm
米莉亞拿到了信,心裡想著。335Please respect copyright.PENANAHA0iXK0bib
「嗯──」335Please respect copyright.PENANAnrVPxmdKLO
「該怎麼辦呢?」335Please respect copyright.PENANA6wCxSJ7s4l
米莉亞把信捏成了一團。335Please respect copyright.PENANAOpew7aIOt1
「嘛──,算了,不管它了。」335Please respect copyright.PENANAczaNqkAZhM
變成了可能兩句話,與多描寫動作。335Please respect copyright.PENANANNimdk7i0W
不會像法爾米亞王國篇,一個動作一個人,下一個就是不同種人的這種情形。335Please respect copyright.PENANAYkEy9OJGns
例如:335Please respect copyright.PENANAmF2W1ZOSaT
米莉亞拿到一封信。335Please respect copyright.PENANAYwM3g1TPOe
「嗯──,嘛──,算了,不管它了。」335Please respect copyright.PENANAOI161ucB8u
三河願表示。335Please respect copyright.PENANAV5a9hRKhe6
「那可是一封情書耶。」335Please respect copyright.PENANAuxaCycZxCf
第4點335Please respect copyright.PENANAOYOA171elK
作者不是中文系畢業,所以可能比較詞窮,請包含,接下來是毛絨部落篇。335Please respect copyright.PENANANBRr3uHQMC