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三行情詩
三行情詩
Submission Closed
Prompt

是否有暗戀過的人,是否有心儀的對象,是否有身邊你愛的,同時也是愛你的人,用精簡的三句話表達你對他們的愛意吧。

格式為只能使用三句話,內容可以是表達對某人的愛意或是對一個人的表白等,若因字數過多而塞在同一句子導致不通順則不符合規則,需使用標點符號,上一句寫完則下一句需寫在下行,請看下面範例

範例:

妳說,

妳討厭我的一切,

但我愛妳勝過於一切。

________________________________

若是覺得有比以上的範例還更好的詩,那就請對他們按下喜歡吧(請誠實評分哪個較好,再決定是否對他們按下喜歡,此外範例屬於本人自己的創作,為經允許請勿隨便使用)



Total Reading Time: 6 minutes

38 comments

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是否必須為對某人說的話?
1 year agoreply

陰鬱 - 不一定喔,像是我的範例其實並沒有對象,只是有那個心境罷了,只是希望你們能夠用精簡的三句話來說出對周遭的人所隱瞞已久心裡話,但若是無對象,那只要心境到也行的
1 year agoreply

- @Three minutes,
好的。
1 year agoreply

- @Three minutes,
不知道我這樣的作品是否可以呢?
1 year agoreply

陰鬱 - @Apollō,
應該吧?雖然和題目三行情詩有些差距,但畢竟我不是寫作當事人,不是那個最清楚你們要表達的或是內容的背後故事等,所以放寬些是沒關係的,而且有參賽者自己就蠻開心的了wwww
1 year agoreply

- @Three minutes,
那麼我可以再發一篇作品嗎?
其實個人來說非常喜歡這個挑戰!
如果和題目有一些差距...非常抱歉!
1 year agoreply

陰鬱 - @Apollō,

可以啊~想再發是可以的,差距的部分沒關係啦~反正評分是由大眾,大眾才會決定妳的作品是否符合標題
1 year agoreply

- @Three minutes,
那麼可以請求你給我的作品一點評語嗎?
1 year agoreply

陰鬱 - @Apollō,
怎麼選我呢?
1 year agoreply

- @Three minutes,
因為你是這個挑戰的發起人啊!
1 year agoreply

陰鬱 - @Apollō,

欸!?還有這樣的喔www
還以為評分什麼的給大眾就好了www
1 year agoreply

- @Three minutes,
你自己也要給一點評語啊...
1 year agoreply

陰鬱 - @Apollō,
嗯…試試吧?畢竟我不是很會評分…
1 year agoreply

- @Three minutes,
好的。
1 year agoreply

陰鬱 - @Apollō,
能先大概解釋一下內容嗎…(人家國文不好…QAQ
1 year agoreply

- @Three minutes,
其實你有甚麼不明白的地方?
1 year agoreply

陰鬱 - @Apollō,
全部…QAQ,不過要是妳解釋越詳細我就比較能去評分…
1 year agoreply

- @Three minutes,
其實不是評分...只是表達你的感受。
1 year agoreply

陰鬱 - @Apollō,
那差不多就是我的意思…
1 year agoreply

- @Three minutes,
應該有人有跟你一樣的疑惑呢!你先去看看吧。
1 year agoreply

陰鬱 - @Apollō,
欸,這表示妳蠻厲害的欸,用決堤來形容自身落淚動作,而且其實有時候做出他人看不懂的作品反而表示意境很深…
1 year agoreply

- @Three minutes,
其實我並沒有預計會有人看不懂......
1 year agoreply

陰鬱 - @Apollō,
我也沒有預計那麼快就有參賽者www
1 year agoreply

- @Three minutes,
宣傳一下就很快有了!
1 year agoreply

陰鬱 - @Apollō,
可以解釋一下這個作品的靈感嗎?
1 year agoreply

- @Three minutes,
其實我個人也曾經因為口是心非而錯過了一些很重要的事情,錯過了一個很重要的人......
1 year agoreply

陰鬱 - @Apollō,
那之所以想遺忘他是因為…?
1 year agoreply

- @Three minutes,
其實我是男的......
1 year agoreply

陰鬱 - 「他」不是也可以用在女生身上嗎?至於我用「妳」是因為習慣了…常常都和女的講話…
1 year agoreply

- @Three minutes,
其實並不是遺忘W
1 year agoreply

陰鬱 - @Apollō,
沒辦法嘛…你內容寫的很像是要遺忘…
1 year agoreply

- @Three minutes,
如果是遺忘的話我會寫在記憶中刪除。
1 year agoreply

陰鬱 - @Apollō,
好吧,不過說到底我還是看不太懂…
1 year agoreply

- @Three minutes,
然後你要不要嘗試參加一下我所舉辦的創作挑戰(宣傳
1 year agoreply

陰鬱 - @Apollō,
不知道欸,要看內容是什麼吧
1 year agoreply

- @Three minutes,
完全武俠創作挑戰。
1 year agoreply

陰鬱 - @Apollō,
喔,那恐怕不能,因為我時間不太夠,目前我是會考生,而且這類型的我不太能寫
1 year agoreply

- @Three minutes,
好的。
1 year agoreply

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