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黑感霧
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[230119]軒轅劍蒼之曜
黑霧
Apr 16, 2019
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玼瑕 - 以大背景下的感情糾葛,我覺得主角四人這樣的描寫算還可以了,
反而是劇情主軸的征服世界、反抗革命等等,這些大義啥的寫得很口號片面角色們嘴巴上講講。
因此整體上就形成了『我以為我在看軒轅劍,結果是蒼色相簿』的觀感...
即使不為情懷來看,至少也會期待看怎麼展開一個東方幻想的世界觀啊...
6 months agoreply

黑霧 - 會覺得嘴巴講講,其實就是篇幅被四人的恩怨情仇搶去了……不過遺憾的是,完全不想看到以半年番方式來增加篇幅解決問題XD
6 months agoreply

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