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Co-Writer  Aqueous*
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 Aqueous
Dec 8, 2018
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VaderZim7891 - Hahaha gave me a good chuckle :)
I noticed a couple readability issues early on; “...isn’t is?” should be “...is it?” most noticably.

Other than that, some formatting to help show what’s a first-person thought or narration, rather than quoted text from a screen.
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