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第十二章<<憶江南.明月何皎皎>>
霧搖山亭
Jan 17, 2019
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零兒 - 嗯,憶江南,真寫盡了明月何皎皎的情味呢!(嗯,對,憶江南,嗯!)
以小令表達出五言古詩的情意,真是很厲害~
4 weeks agoreply

霧搖山亭 - 感謝!
但…總覺得第3、4句構有點不順口…XD
4 weeks agoreply

零兒 - @霧搖山亭,既然你都提起了....那兩句基本上有對到會比較好,像“冬季猶存梅雪傲,春時期盼放桃紅”的二二三二二三。不過不影響詩意依然是最重要的。
4 weeks agoreply

霧搖山亭 - @零兒,哇!好…好高深的學問啊!沒錯,七字句應需二二三對着較順口(習慣了六字的《如夢令》,基本上只要二二二,放三個詞語便順口XD)
4 weeks agoreply

簡潔 - 五言古詩竟可取萃成小令喔~~~
1 month agoreply

霧搖山亭 - 玩點新意思嘛XD目標是寫完十九首!順便學學古人的文筆風格!
1 month agoreply

簡潔 - @霧搖山亭,十九首嗎?!會不會太艱巨了TT
1 month agoreply

霧搖山亭 - @簡潔,古詩十九首嘛!加上上面的,只差七篇XD
1 month agoreply

簡潔 - @霧搖山亭,喔?是這樣喔。。。我還没看過這個系列呢。。。
1 month agoreply

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