This story is beautifully written in a simple opening chapter, but it catches and reels you in when you're done with the first paragraph. The writing style flows as smooth as a river, and makes the picture they're trying to tell you appear in your head perfectly. I saw few grammar errors, but overall, I really enjoyed reading it.
The characters come to life before your own eyes. It makes you want the girl's parents come back, it makes you want her and her friend to finish the tree house, and it makes you want her to get back home before the sun sets. I highly recommend reading this.ns 126.96.36.199da2