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愛上殺人魔的我絕對是瘋了
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Rosalin Mor - 加油!
8 months agoreply

Rosalin Mor - 我也是啊~(很嫩)這對我來說已經有點算大師了ww我都沒辦法打這麼長一篇XD
8 months agoreply

必不笑 - 妳的小說我看過了 建議妳第一段改的長一點 帶入伏筆與事件主題這樣🤔🤔 譬如說女主(應該是公主對吧?)她的父王召集韋恩和漢米去宮殿 然後女主吵著要去之類的 這就可以代入環境還有事件了  
8 months agoreply

必不笑 - 我也不是第一次寫就這樣啊  而且老實說我現在卡文了 有點不知道該怎麼辦XD
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8 months agoreply

Rosalin Mor - 當之無愧啊…
8 months agoreply

必不笑 - 沒啦 妳真的過獎了 我還嫩著呢 還有太多地方需要改進
8 months agoreply

Rosalin Mor - 哎呀…寫得這麼好是一定會期待的!
8 months agoreply

必不笑 - 哈哈 過獎了😄😄
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