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叛變-香港
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第九章-飛虎隊(2)
不文無墨
Mar 6, 2019
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應雨靜 - 寫得不錯,我想香港人看會更有感受。

一個小小的建議:

Yes/yes, Ray/ray sir 的英語大小楷可以的話宜修訂統一一下。
1 year agoreply

不文無墨 - 好呀 好多謝你呀😭😭😭😭
1 year agoreply

蘇奇恩 - 說好的,三四日更新一次,等到花兒也謝了~
Btw essay搞定了沒有?💪
1 year agoreply

不文無墨 - 好 諗諗點整先好 thx😂
1 year agoreply

蘇奇恩 - 警隊個邊嘅角色出場較突然,無乜花字數去介紹佢地,我個人覺得開始睇得有啲辛苦。
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