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Friendship
Inspirational
月下靈樨香滿肩
Writer 露娜仙仙
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  • G: General Audiences
  • PG: Parental Guidance Suggested
  • PG-13: Parents Strongly Cautioned
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第三章 祭舞
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Comments ( 9 )
腥霜 - 聖女就是皇帝任命的國土御用吉祥物加守護神的用途?
8 months agoreply

露娜仙仙 - 在這裡是上天任用的守護女神唷~
8 months agoreply

腥霜 - @露娜仙仙,上天任命皇帝任命的守護女神wwwww
8 months agoreply

露娜仙仙 - @腥霜,基本上,要有一定認證,然後皇帝也對她們必恭必敬的這樣(笑
8 months agoreply

腥霜 - @露娜仙仙,父皇敬畏女兒…
8 months agoreply

醉美人 - 略略看了第一章,就覺得太多人物國家背景的描述了,顯得有些平淡,建議可先用一些小情節或對話稍作開場,方可引人入勝。btw,就建議而已啦,下文才是最重要的,加油!
10 months agoreply

露娜仙仙 - 謝謝意見^^
10 months agoreply

醉美人 - @露娜仙仙,(´∀`)♡
10 months agoreply

露娜仙仙 - @醉美人,咱靈樨的西方版本:<失落的封印>開場就是一堆對白(笑),到時候也請多指教唷!
10 months agoreply

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