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#9

seven » point discontinuity

Aretice N. Treader
Mar 27, 2016
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once upon a star - I don't like this chapter :'( why did infinity date the other boy? this is not right! *frowns and makes the ugliest face she could muster* *frowns at the computer screen and starts crying* I feel sorry for beyond! This is not right!
5 years ago
Aretice N. Treader - Haha, they were just friends at this point. They hadn't known each other for that long, honestly, and she only went on one date. It's cute you feel so strongly about this. 
5 years ago
once upon a star - @Aretice N. Treader, I see! I'm a little worried about the ending of the story..I'm not sure if i have the courage to read on
5 years ago
once upon a star - but I really liked how you named the chapters Aretice..the flow and emotions of beyond's writing for some of the chapters are especially beautiful too :')
5 years ago
once upon a star - The chapters I liked most were '8 >> conditional' (issue 10) and 'eleven >> monomial' (issue 13)
5 years ago
Aretice N. Treader - @once upon a star, There's not a reason for you to be worried now, though, because they're together now. :) 

Thank you! I really worked hard on the chapter titles, actually. I have a whole outline and everything for them. I think I made this first part a little too long, though. :/
5 years ago
once upon a star - @Aretice N. Treader, I see! right! :') It's great that they're together now! You mean maybe this chapter is a little long?
5 years ago
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