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親愛的,原來你在曼谷!
Writer 麻花子
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親愛的,原來你在曼谷!
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麻花子
Mar 22, 2019
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麻花子 - 謝謝你的提醒,是打多了,已修改。
還有感謝你的支持呀!!
6 months agoreply

應雨靜 - 以第一人稱的寫法很不錯,交待也很清楚。

一個小建議:其中一段的「親身上來看親身來看」語義重覆了,應該是打多了吧。
6 months agoreply

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