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Writer 隔壁家可爱滴小孩
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第一章之惊险的风浪
隔壁家可爱滴小孩
Aug 15, 2019
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隔壁家可爱滴小孩 - 好高境界,谢谢你的建议
3 days agoreply

x98i1k7 - 最好一层一层慢慢揭开面纱,而非直接交代完人物  ,以一个场景为开始然后慢慢写剧情,描绘人物会更好,多一份神秘感和让人读下去的欲望。
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