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    穹葉
    穹葉
    「若問心不知是否無愧,那也沒有問的必要了。」 本人小葉,文繪雙渣,立志成為蕉園名嘴(真誠的幹話王)ヽ( ° ▽°)ノ 被動技能是【搞事】和【自虐】。主動技能是【嘴砲】和【自虐】。(咦) ❖❖❖ 因個人身心健康問題,【舊作】(2020年前隻小說作品)全數停更,大部分已隱藏處理。 僅留下《孽芳華》系列作為個人代表。 2020-08網誌重啟,就是一般的網誌,說說心得跟抒發的地方。 另開《說書館》,主要為放置2020年所參加之創挑文、自開創挑之範例文,有機率出現自產短篇輕文學之文章。
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小葉認真的假工具書
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#43
01-1.故事的構成(前言、角色)
22 Likes
354 Reads
21 Comments
#42
01-2.故事的構成(劇情)
18 Likes
326 Reads
15 Comments
#41
02-1.關於故事類型之微小說(含篇幅與節奏)
13 Likes
278 Reads
8 Comments
#40
02-2.關於故事類型之散文(含篇幅與節奏)
12 Likes
284 Reads
13 Comments
#39
02-3.關於故事類型之其他(含篇幅與節奏)
13 Likes
263 Reads
6 Comments
#38
03-1.關於小說類型之篇幅
11 Likes
274 Reads
7 Comments
#37
03-2.關於小說類型(文學、大眾、輕小說)
15 Likes
276 Reads
6 Comments
#36
04-1.關於三種人稱之第一人稱
13 Likes
245 Reads
12 Comments
#35
04-2.關於三種人稱之第三人稱
13 Likes
236 Reads
9 Comments
#34
04-3.關於三種人稱之第二人稱與總結
12 Likes
236 Reads
13 Comments
#33
05-1.關於視角之第一人稱延伸
12 Likes
233 Reads
10 Comments
#32
05-2.關於視角之第三人稱延伸
11 Likes
237 Reads
8 Comments
#31
06.關於大綱(類型)
9 Likes
222 Reads
11 Comments
#30
07-1.關於大綱細節(表格、鬆散)
8 Likes
209 Reads
2 Comments
#29
07-2.關於大綱細節(整合、編劇)
10 Likes
210 Reads
2 Comments
#28
08-1.淺談修辭(前言、譬喻)
9 Likes
218 Reads
7 Comments
#27
08-2.淺談修辭(借代、轉化)
9 Likes
207 Reads
12 Comments
#26
08-3.淺談修辭(類疊、設問)
9 Likes
186 Reads
7 Comments
#25
08-4.淺談修辭(映襯、錯綜)
8 Likes
233 Reads
7 Comments
#24
08-5.淺談修辭(轉品、鑲嵌)
7 Likes
190 Reads
2 Comments
#23
08-6.淺談修辭(對偶、排比)
7 Likes
184 Reads
4 Comments
#22
08-7.淺談修辭(示現、層遞)
6 Likes
205 Reads
9 Comments
#21
09-1.關於角色(性格面向)
10 Likes
230 Reads
15 Comments
#20
09-2.關於角色(扁型人物)
8 Likes
216 Reads
3 Comments
#19
09-3.關於角色(圓型人物)
11 Likes
208 Reads
3 Comments
#18
10.關於各種取名
12 Likes
223 Reads
19 Comments
#17
11-1.敘事手法(記敘順序)
10 Likes
208 Reads
5 Comments
#16
11-2.敘事手法(開頭手法)
6 Likes
221 Reads
4 Comments
#15
12-1.場景與鏡頭(開頭)
5 Likes
199 Reads
9 Comments
#14
12-2.場景與鏡頭(動作細節)
6 Likes
190 Reads
6 Comments
#13
12-3.場景與鏡頭(表情細節)
6 Likes
177 Reads
12 Comments
#12
12-4.場景與鏡頭(場景細節)
6 Likes
170 Reads
6 Comments
#11
12-5.場景與鏡頭(場景、物件特寫)
6 Likes
171 Reads
3 Comments
#10
13-1.劇情設計、情節安排(前言)
7 Likes
169 Reads
4 Comments
#9
13-2.劇情設計、情節安排
7 Likes
171 Reads
6 Comments
#8
預定主題已完成!之心得(文長)
12 Likes
255 Reads
15 Comments
#7
14-1.練習方法(文筆)
6 Likes
250 Reads
0 Comments
#6
14-2.練習方法(寫作)
6 Likes
272 Reads
2 Comments
#5
15-1.故事的誕生(起源)
4 Likes
201 Reads
4 Comments
#4
15-2.故事的誕生(開坑準備)
4 Likes
195 Reads
0 Comments
#3
15-3.故事的誕生(劇情設計)
5 Likes
153 Reads
1 Comment
#2
15-4.故事的誕生(設定)
3 Likes
198 Reads
2 Comments
#1
15-5.故事的誕生(完稿)
5 Likes
194 Reads
4 Comments

 ※因為網誌排序是反的,我有自行調整順序,如樓層自動位移,望請見諒。※

  呱呱呱,各位貴安,我是小葉。

  這裡會放置寫作相關的東西,談不上知識,說不上教學,只是淺談我自己的理解。

  非正當教學文,只是假工具書,所有東西都不具有絕對性。別讓框架限制了你,想像力就是你的超能力~

  只談基礎中的基礎,表面中的表面,簡單中的簡單,並不代表寫作的全部喔:D

  蕉園其實滿多大佬的,但我就是個可愛小萌新,如果你信的話ಠ౪ಠ

  對了我是台灣蕉農,口語上跟港港小夥伴可能不同,有看不懂的可以詢問。看不懂中文就請不要問了謝謝(›´ω`‹ )(看不懂中文好像也看不懂這句話了)

  Okay……Don't ask if you don't understand Chinese.

  另外目前文風偏向古風,示範多為白話古風,有無法理解的可發問!

  關於不才敝人小葉我:

  非專科出生、非專業人士、非大佬、廢話很多、很隨便,筆齡不算長,起手式是寫詩,之後寫小品文,寫小說的筆齡算短的。

  沒有進修過寫作相關課程,不懂學術理論與知識,我希望用簡單的語言將「複雜且深奧」的理論呈現給小萌新們,幫助小萌新更好理解寫作的那點事兒。

  因此有哪裡說得不好,還請大佬們見諒(再來瞎逼逼是欠懟嗎)。內容中我有給自己科普過的,都有明講,沒講的就是我自己腦袋裡原有的概念,歡迎指教,但切勿鑽牛角尖。

  謹願能幫上一點點小忙。

❈❈❈

  那麼,一般不分體裁,但自傳、回憶錄那類的真實內容不在討論範圍中,著重於「虛構內容」的體裁,不僅限於小說,一率通稱為「故事」,有特別提及小說或詩詞等等便是專指。會額外補充也以「小說」為主。

  對了,內容花花綠綠的上了不少顏色,那是我個人怪癖,望請見諒。

  一篇中提及其他主題的,都有附上其連結。如果連到作品的話,絕對不是被駭(*´▽`*)

  內容中有用到的示範,都是我高薪(兩根雞腿)聘請自家小孩「聶小花」與「陸小虛」(經化名處理?)。

  對他們有興趣的,可以前往《孽芳華‧紅塵卷》找他們玩。呃,看他們玩。

  (寫這東西沒錢拿,打廣告不為過吧இдஇ)


  內容有所錯漏歡迎提出,但專業學識依舊敬謝不敏,感恩。

  如有好心人士願意給予支持,可直接砸爆我或前往《孽芳華‧紅塵卷》或其他作品,感恩感恩。

──獻醜了。​​​​​​​


《無連結概略式目錄》

01. 故事的構成 兩篇

02. 故事類型 三篇

03. 小說類型 兩篇

04. 三種人稱 三篇

05. 各人稱視角 兩篇

06. 大綱類型 一篇

07. 大綱細節 兩篇

08. 常見修辭 七篇

09. 圓扁角色 三篇

10. 各種取名 

11. 敘事手法 兩篇

12. 場景與鏡頭 五篇

13. 劇情設計、情節安排 兩篇

(暫告一段落,穿插一篇個人心得)

14. 練習方法 兩篇

15. 故事的誕生 五篇

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#43
01-1.故事的構成(前言、角色)
22 Likes
354 Reads
21 Comments
#42
01-2.故事的構成(劇情)
18 Likes
326 Reads
15 Comments
#41
02-1.關於故事類型之微小說(含篇幅與節奏)
13 Likes
278 Reads
8 Comments
#40
02-2.關於故事類型之散文(含篇幅與節奏)
12 Likes
284 Reads
13 Comments
#39
02-3.關於故事類型之其他(含篇幅與節奏)
13 Likes
263 Reads
6 Comments
#38
03-1.關於小說類型之篇幅
11 Likes
274 Reads
7 Comments
#37
03-2.關於小說類型(文學、大眾、輕小說)
15 Likes
276 Reads
6 Comments
#36
04-1.關於三種人稱之第一人稱
13 Likes
245 Reads
12 Comments
#35
04-2.關於三種人稱之第三人稱
13 Likes
236 Reads
9 Comments
#34
04-3.關於三種人稱之第二人稱與總結
12 Likes
236 Reads
13 Comments
#33
05-1.關於視角之第一人稱延伸
12 Likes
233 Reads
10 Comments
#32
05-2.關於視角之第三人稱延伸
11 Likes
237 Reads
8 Comments
#31
06.關於大綱(類型)
9 Likes
222 Reads
11 Comments
#30
07-1.關於大綱細節(表格、鬆散)
8 Likes
209 Reads
2 Comments
#29
07-2.關於大綱細節(整合、編劇)
10 Likes
210 Reads
2 Comments
#28
08-1.淺談修辭(前言、譬喻)
9 Likes
218 Reads
7 Comments
#27
08-2.淺談修辭(借代、轉化)
9 Likes
207 Reads
12 Comments
#26
08-3.淺談修辭(類疊、設問)
9 Likes
186 Reads
7 Comments
#25
08-4.淺談修辭(映襯、錯綜)
8 Likes
233 Reads
7 Comments
#24
08-5.淺談修辭(轉品、鑲嵌)
7 Likes
190 Reads
2 Comments
#23
08-6.淺談修辭(對偶、排比)
7 Likes
184 Reads
4 Comments
#22
08-7.淺談修辭(示現、層遞)
6 Likes
205 Reads
9 Comments
#21
09-1.關於角色(性格面向)
10 Likes
230 Reads
15 Comments
#20
09-2.關於角色(扁型人物)
8 Likes
216 Reads
3 Comments
#19
09-3.關於角色(圓型人物)
11 Likes
208 Reads
3 Comments
#18
10.關於各種取名
12 Likes
223 Reads
19 Comments
#17
11-1.敘事手法(記敘順序)
10 Likes
208 Reads
5 Comments
#16
11-2.敘事手法(開頭手法)
6 Likes
221 Reads
4 Comments
#15
12-1.場景與鏡頭(開頭)
5 Likes
199 Reads
9 Comments
#14
12-2.場景與鏡頭(動作細節)
6 Likes
190 Reads
6 Comments
#13
12-3.場景與鏡頭(表情細節)
6 Likes
177 Reads
12 Comments
#12
12-4.場景與鏡頭(場景細節)
6 Likes
170 Reads
6 Comments
#11
12-5.場景與鏡頭(場景、物件特寫)
6 Likes
171 Reads
3 Comments
#10
13-1.劇情設計、情節安排(前言)
7 Likes
169 Reads
4 Comments
#9
13-2.劇情設計、情節安排
7 Likes
171 Reads
6 Comments
#8
預定主題已完成!之心得(文長)
12 Likes
255 Reads
15 Comments
#7
14-1.練習方法(文筆)
6 Likes
250 Reads
0 Comments
#6
14-2.練習方法(寫作)
6 Likes
272 Reads
2 Comments
#5
15-1.故事的誕生(起源)
4 Likes
201 Reads
4 Comments
#4
15-2.故事的誕生(開坑準備)
4 Likes
195 Reads
0 Comments
#3
15-3.故事的誕生(劇情設計)
5 Likes
153 Reads
1 Comment
#2
15-4.故事的誕生(設定)
3 Likes
198 Reads
2 Comments
#1
15-5.故事的誕生(完稿)
5 Likes
194 Reads
4 Comments

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