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兔子的軟肋
Writer 遺兔
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  • PG-13: Parents Strongly Cautioned
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千年解咒師 - 黃衣 (自第六章)
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毛鼠之之 - 繼續期待囉😂雖然看不太懂😅
1 week agoreply

遺兔 - 是節奏跳太快了嗎?😱😱
1 week agoreply

毛鼠之之 - @遺兔,不算是🤔可能突然冒出一些角色,跟上一章連貫性不高,只不過有用左輔帶出來,還OK啦,不過有可能是我不習慣這樣的類型,兔兔不要太介意😂
1 week agoreply

遺兔 - @毛鼠之之,每次寫新角色都怕讀者會混亂,所以不敢把新角色堆在一章內出場🙊🙊不過話說回來,還真是比較少小說會不停切換角色視覺
1 week agoreply

毛鼠之之 - @遺兔,沒關係啦,算是一種新的挑戰👍其實我寫的先前就有切換角色的感覺,後來被念過就改善了😂😂
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