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#8＜誘冬＞BY 欠我一粒甘栗　簡評

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#8誘冬BY 欠我一粒甘栗

看起來是隨機誘拐泛的故事，著重點在於描寫母親疑神疑鬼的壓力與惶恐。

本來期待結尾會有什麼反轉，不過並沒有，女兒的死亡於是顯得自然平淡。

不太確定為什麼結尾要提到「想松樹一樣」？可能是人呆站久了像木頭？

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