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月亮不太亮
By T少
T少
Oct 1, 2020
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五香肉丁 - 感覺文中包含了隱喻政治的元素,但是故事本身交待不清不楚,場景切換與描述都很混亂,導致觀感差勁。
3 weeks agoreply

T少 - 我改了,請再看
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