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叩嘍叩嘍
Oct 5, 2020
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有無餘 - 哈哈,反轉>虐,不過主角也太慘了⋯⋯
3 months agoreply

叩嘍叩嘍 - 果然偏題了,而且我最後收尾收得很草率……功力不夠啊,哈哈哈。
3 months agoreply

有無餘 - @叩嘍叩嘍, 不算偏題啦,只不過我個人覺得這個虐度被情節反轉稍微蓋過了一點而已啦。其他文筆起承轉合我覺得還是不錯的(^з^)-☆
3 months agoreply

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