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《靈士》
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  • G: General Audiences
  • PG: Parental Guidance Suggested
  • PG-13: Parents Strongly Cautioned
  • R: Restricted
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By 夜7
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Oct 26, 2020
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馬菲 - 你寫完要執下先。

例如「似乎是結束了,不,目前結束了罷了。」一句句子十四個字入面有三個「了」字,好累贅,讀者睇得辛苦。
2 months agoreply

夜7 - 故事我有調整一些部分,可能改的時候沒注意到。能那麼仔細的看我作品,非常感謝🙏。
2 months agoreply

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