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Crime
Romance
The Trident
Writer Tommy Gunner
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  • G: General Audiences
  • PG: Parental Guidance Suggested
  • PG-13: Parents Strongly Cautioned
  • R: Restricted
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The Trident
The Trident
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The year is 1947 in Brooklyn, and PI Ray Allison is on the case when he is hired by Gwen Sanford to look into the death of a high profile millionaire and weapon manufacturer with shady connections, her father, Stephen Sanford, who suddenly died in a bizarre car crash which is quickly written off as a suicide. The case will prove to be anything but straightforward however. A dearth of direct evidence and a parade of suspects with possible reasons to kill promises to complicate Allison’s investigation. Furthermore, his involvement with Gwen and the alluring stranger, Vera Walters, may just prove his undoing…

Total Reading Time: 36 minutes

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2 comments

Saiko - Good synopsis with some really high-vocabulary words but I would just maybe simplify it a little bit. It's a bit confusing to read. Still a good, interesting synopsis. Shorten the sentences, and put a comma after the 'however' that is in one of the sentences :)
2 months agoreply

Tommy Gunner - Thanks for the feedback! I'll definitely take all your points into consideration. I hope you enjoy the next chapters :) 
2 months agoreply

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