可惜文中太多「我」了,如果可以換寫法會更好。最後一句的處理比較好,不然就只是普通的夢境。對於怪物沒有比較深入描繪,所以感覺不恐怖。繼續加油吧,希望潛水中~生活順利。106Please respect copyright.PENANAAR0c3gJCZr
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以怪物為主題:106Please respect copyright.PENANAY8anvy7MDD
創挑還沒有結果啊!106Please respect copyright.PENANAEjEyu8reGt
有了嗎?106Please respect copyright.PENANAY8ONv9klue
還沒啊……106Please respect copyright.PENANAXvlBEGMnrg
怎麼還沒呢?106Please respect copyright.PENANAGm5ld5NC4q
怎麼呢……106Please respect copyright.PENANAfcoXdUDqGn
拖延就是一只看不見卻處處有的怪獸,106Please respect copyright.PENANAf9OPJVpOtr
我們的生命,越拖越短,越拖越乏。106Please respect copyright.PENANAoAheNmO39e
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我想在其他平台發,我嘗試不要用創挑。106Please respect copyright.PENANAm7lBuU2cah
今天會把報告交上來吧?106Please respect copyright.PENANA0qDi8gwLSK
我聽說下個星期才是截止日期~106Please respect copyright.PENANASo3RTFRvir
啊!有怪獸!106Please respect copyright.PENANASv5NJv8fS3
哪裡?那裡?106Please respect copyright.PENANAH058hiWZvz
這裡有,這裡有,那裡也有~106Please respect copyright.PENANApg9Rqz5zhN
就在你你我的時間裡!106Please respect copyright.PENANAlyj37p8j7O
生命,越拖越短,越拖越乏。106Please respect copyright.PENANAvxiyNbTY6u
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〈被怪物襲擊〉潛水中~106Please respect copyright.PENANATE1vls4KrR
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