Hina doesn't seem like much so far, but I definitely have a lot to say about how she came to be. OK, well, not a lot, but… you'll see.8964 copyright protection24PENANA8IPQ2gJONs 維尼
You know how Inazuma used to be a prick in the early stages of APS? Well… I think I can say Hina was just as bad.8964 copyright protection24PENANAxKO1akQi8z 維尼
(Oh, dear God, I'm gonna be cringing a lot…)8964 copyright protection24PENANAXXOpCH1xaY 維尼
So, in the first draft, she was just… such an airhead. But, like, too dense to the point where she was just mad annoying. Said the dumbest stuff ever, did the dumbest things ever, and perceived things stupidly. Like, in the first draft — that damned first draft — she thought that getting interrogations and the whole fire incident wasn't that bad because "hey, we get to be on TV."8964 copyright protection24PENANAwWhISlisi7 維尼
Hina. Girl. Shizuka just got almost burned alive and then you say the situation ain't bad? WHAT?!8964 copyright protection24PENANA2Nxcj8Q7RU 維尼
And… like…. just…just…just… UGH! She was so annoying! I'm sorry but that's the only way I can describe the old version of Hina. She would fight with Ryo (verbally, not physically, just to clarify) at the beginning of the story and it was all her fault. Because she was just too much of an idiot and too much of a stuck-up person. Yeah, her backstory garnered a tiny bit of sympathy, but only, like, 3% of it. (Her conflict was less serious and dealt with more real-life, non-power issues anyway.)8964 copyright protection24PENANAycekKIfdWj 維尼
Thank God I changed her up a lot. Now she's actually a lot nicer, and she's at least not one huge dunce. I don't know what Past Me was thinking. 8964 copyright protection24PENANAELtdZNWKL8 維尼
Actually, I was, at one point, going to make her an enemy of the team, but I scrapped that because…. well, that's a reason I would have to make a whole 'nother BTS post about. 8964 copyright protection24PENANAjWpahzGEFt 維尼
Hina's power always stayed the same — you know, paralyzation. I don't recall me ever deciding on a different ability for her. So her superpower was never a hassle, just her character. 8964 copyright protection24PENANAvQxNXQddxQ 維尼
That's really all I have to say about Hina. Man, this is shorter than Mr. Yoshiaki's. 8964 copyright protection24PENANAlix2XRIzOI 維尼
Then again, all I really had to do in this post was cringe and ramble about Past Cheeto's poor decisions on her character and then be grateful that I changed her.8964 copyright protection24PENANAg4f7MjbboP 維尼
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You know, the more I think about my poor writing choices, the more I want to slap my younger self in the face.28Please respect copyright.PENANAy6Kp4kK3cZ
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