So, I figured I’d tell you guys this. I edited chapter 8 and 12 because I realize that some of Shizuka’s actions kind of need a better reason. I’ll just be straightforward — I basically changed it so that Mrs. Aiko just has a lot of stress or exhaustion from work, so Shizuka figures that she doesn’t want to bother her with much of her own life, just to take things off Mrs. Aiko’s plate (that’s actually a somewhat common reason for lying) and while that doesn’t mean she should hide everything, it does at least make some more sense? And to make her seem more caring. I dunno, it was the best I could do. It’s not a plot-changing edit, but I figured I’d tell y’all.8964 copyright protection25ＰＥＮＡＮＡIbLdjBvhiz 維尼
I think I just woke up worrying if Shizuka was a likable character and I realize that there are a couple things I could fix, and I just couldn’t leave it that way. I should still ask for your feedback, though. So: 8964 copyright protection25ＰＥＮＡＮＡCJUT6Vu67A 維尼
On a scale of 1-10 (1 worst, 10 best) what would you rate Shizuka? (Considering these few edits made as well.) And maybe explain why. You could just do this in the comments I guess. 8964 copyright protection25ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9QMAZ5NArQ 維尼
(Sorry for asking, but I just need some closure on this topic, and feedback, because I’m just overly insecure about it, okay?)8964 copyright protection25ＰＥＮＡＮＡaUIEGcvY0M 維尼
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