I think you can tell that I'm really just cranking out these "let's talk about" (LTA) posts because I strangely have a lot of fun writing them. I figure that the last person (before I move onto some other characters) I need to talk about is Shizuka.32Please respect copyright.PENANAeXuNqmsoIs
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I oddly like her? Well, I don't know if it's odd to like her. I don't even know, do you guys like her? (I'm so so sorry that I ask this so much; it's just that I really really care about her character so I wanna make sure she's likable, and I worry excessively about it.)32Please respect copyright.PENANAm4tZh5Z6Qx
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Anywho, it took me a LOOOOONG while to realize there were just a few errors I made with her, but those are fixed up now. I was a bit oblivious to the fact she could be cold at times (not cold all the time, but sometimes) and so when I got that pointed out (thank you Gironashi for helping me with that; I really appreciate feedback!) I got kinda worried but it was reasonable. 8964 copyright protection28PENANAdFZBKrYhDW 維尼
So now, with some edits, Shizuka hopefully reads as a more likable and a less unsympathetic-at-times character. I guess the reason I didn't see the flaws at first was because, well, I saw that she cared a lot about her friends, and that was more shown than her other issues, so I probably missed that. I apologize, and I hope that now that she's more sympathetic to Mrs. Aiko (among other characters) she's better. 8964 copyright protection28PENANAALLHa4jcRP 維尼
I also feel kinda bad, with what I'm trying to plan for her future. I remember having ideas in my head I wanted for her in the upcoming books. But then I genuinely felt pretty sorry. Like... there are characters who might get served worse and I'm partly sorry, but this time I did feel pretty bad. (I don’t count that as a spoiler cuz I’m being very vague.)8964 copyright protection28PENANAr28fNpVptK 維尼
Still! Whatever kinda-painful moments are coming up, Shizuka, I'm not gonna hesitate to bring it upon you! GOT IT?32Please respect copyright.PENANApmM6NtUgri
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I'm speaking to someone that doesn't exist. 8964 copyright protection28PENANAXuMwqK6K2i 維尼
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Okay... now that I've established the fact that I'm going insane and talking as if my characters are real, let's get back on point - she might have some more painful stuff coming for her. I have the basic groundwork laid out, so I need to elaborate a bit more, but listen, I got the ideas, and that's what matters. While what she'd been faced with right now might be a medium-level type of hurt, you shouldn't worry, because things are gonna get worse ;)8964 copyright protection28PENANAK2JLClt842 維尼
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PS: Shizuka kinda reminds me that there's no best girl in APS - not that all the female characters suck - and this is my thinking: most series usually gotta have a best girl (and best boy.) I'm an extremely stupid clown that worries about something like that, so yes, feel free to call me unreasonable for fretting over something dumb. Still, if there's best boi, it's only logical that best girl exists. But I'ma let you guys be the judge of that. OK, stupid idiotic ramble over.8964 copyright protection28PENANAWB5D18EpgS 維尼
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